raw forming volume 7 part 4 - 1968 may-september  work & days: a lifetime journal project

2 May 1968

[journal]

Mad Murray - talking about the men in Athens, "They really do undress you and when you're naked they put their hand in their pocket." And the lesbian who took the photograph of a tree upside down in marsh water, who "gets so excited about your body that you can't stand it, like a man." The Italian who drugged her so that she woke up being stroked gently, all night, in a hotel, "even between the legs," saying "piccola Maddelena, piccola Maddelena." Talking about home in Winnipeg: "I go through the rooms and see myself in the mirror and I feel really superfluous, I look more like a pudding than usual." Then she goes home, leather jacket and brown pants, boots, her hair down her back and the bookbag twisted around her neck so that she can ride the bicycle.

I'm in bed. I've finished both psychology courses. My mind is free. Now what will I do with it.

[undated letter]

The last few weeks of exams very quite bad. I didn't work very hard, but in spite of it, I would wake up at 5 or 6 a.m. with my heart pounding, thinking of what I still had to do. I wrote one exam on May 1, having already written five of them, then another on the 2nd, then spent the 3rd and 4th fleeing by reading a novel, feeling intensely anxious and guilty because I knew I should be studying, then spent the 5th writing a philosophy essay that had been due on the 4th, and rushed it to the professor's house by 10 p.m. in first draft, then studied for a philosophy comprehensive exam that I wrote from 2 to 5 on Monday May 6, then rushed straight to the law office for an interview.

Oh yes, on Saturday night I'd gone babysitting for the Coxes, one of Greg's very young political science professors. On Sunday Mrs Cox had phoned to say that a law professor who was visiting them might have a job for me and would I speak to him. So ol' Hugh Lawford got onto the phone and arranged to see me right after my exam. He's a good looking man, about forty, very defensive but uncomfortably intelligent - he started off by asking whether there was anything I wanted to know; I asked if I could start in two weeks. He looked surprised. He asked if I could type and then sat me down to prove it - the typewriter was an electric one and the keys were spaced differently from my little portable. Moreover I had stage fright and my hand was shaking violently. I goofed of course, couldn't even copy the first line correctly. Then he announced that he hadn't really been testing my typing at all, really only whether I watched carefully and noticed the details since accuracy was essential to his sort of work etc. As it happened I had noticed the detail but my typewriter ran away from me and I'd made a mistake that made it look as if I hadn't.

He asked me about languages, since the job includes researching in other languages - I said French, German, and enough Italian and Spanish to make it out. So he got me some Portuguese to read, which I managed. Then he got out a bundle of papers and said "I'm deluged with applications for this job" and began counting them, "One, two, eight," commenting about their qualifications as he went. "What makes you think I should hire you rather than these?" I said, "It would save you interviewing them all." He said "I have interviewed them all, my dear." Then he asked if he could take me anywhere on his way home. As he dropped me off at Greg's place on Clergy Street, I said "Should I leave you a temporary address?" and he said "I don't think I have anything to say to you - just show up on Monday morning in two weeks."

Wow!

At Greg's place - chaos - we are moving. Most of the big things Greg had already taken over to 28 Maitland St Apt #6 but now we had to gather up and sort the small things. We were still doing it at 9:30 when two old ladies registering voters and two of our friends came over. We soon had the friends helping and then as we were making tea, two more friends came and so we didn't manage to get up at five next day as we'd wanted, to leave on this trip - we didn't get away until 10:30 in fact, but you see how packed together things have been. I'm lending you our log, enclosed, nearly up to date.

I haven't heard from Judy for a long time although Paul wrote about the store - we are going out to the post office now so I'll send you this.

[travel log]

Tuesday 7 May

Thousand Islands, northern New York State along the end of Lake Ontario. Color - ghostly white-blossomed trees on the slopes, pale yellow green lit like gas flame, brown-red-orange sticky new red maple leaves folded up like bats' wings, lawns covered with dandelions, new lilac. A scattering of grave stones on a hill covered with thin tall trees, lying in the filtered green light. A weathered blue and green house with a rough door, flashing past. Farms with hilly pastures, Sackets Harbour, Pulaski, Weedsport [?], Auburn, with gracious Eastern houses, huge, encircled by verandahs, cornered or decorated with towers, laced over with wood carving. Wide streets, old trees and large front lawns, all lying in nearly complete silence, few people around.

These northern New York State towns are archetypal - 1890's. Old brick buildings on Main Street, still held by the families that built them then. Southern New York, a strange architectural variation - high rooms with symmetrically posed rectangular windows, small and covered with iron grating. Northern Pennsylvania, Athens, Towanda, Muncy, barns painted red with ornate Gothic slatted windows painted white and distributed over the façade symmetrically. Apples and Bavarian rye bread. Remembered the camera left in the garbage can!

Camping near Louisburg and Mifflinburg in a deserted campsite, cold, remembered last year's first cold night at Cowen's Gap near McConnellsburg. Hills. Stopped for gas at a Shell station beside a river, low branches, the broad river sparkling like sequins as if it were without motion, light reverberating between green branches and green lawn. Skipped from happiness, looking in the dusty gas station window.

Winters State Park by 7:30, near Mifflinburg, very cold. We put up the tent and ate lettuce and tuna sandwiches on the leftover Bavarian rye, crawled into the tent and slept in a sweater, a shirt, Michel's ski jacket, tights, socks, jeans, under two sleeping bags. Noisy birds - no ranger, although we were apprehensive about not paying the two dollars. Jets going to Washington sounded like a ranger's truck - Greg would sit bolt upright if he heard one.

Weds

Mifflinburg is not far from Gettysburg - the familiar orchard hills, faded apple blossoms turning brown among the new leaves. The square of the town with its pseudo-Civil War business buildings. The Howard Johnston across from one of the battlefield areas left us a whole pot of coffee - sunshine this time. Then the road toward Washington, past the peach orchard that stood during the war (not the same trees) and was riddled with bullets. One small corner of Maryland with fierce traffic signs. Greg had a yearning for peanut butter and banana sandwiches so we stopped at an A & P and then sat on a roadside eating - very thick chunky peanut butter and thick slices of banana, with trucks zooming by and whistling.

Over the Ptomac at Point of Rocks, and into Virginia. After 95 miles a stop for breakfast at a roadside table, down a series of small roads (skillful navigation from me), huge rich farms, dairy and beef, hills, prosperous barns and houses close to the road, flowering bushes, battlefield sites - Manassas. Where pastures lie now, the soil is becoming red.

Near Orange, in the afternoon, the area where Madison lived, called Montpelier. We couldn't find the plantation house, but followed a red dirt road to a cemetery, small and square, enclosed by a fence and a drive, all enclosed by hedges, where Madison and Dolly are buried and neighbours and relatives, among the flowering bushes. Two thoroughbred horses came to the fence to eat parts of the hedge, a big chestnut and a beautiful black with a huge head. The cemetery and the horses were a beautiful pocket of quiet. Because of the horses, the old gentry seemed to be alive and perhaps living in the clump of huge trees on a hill where a flash of white might have been the mansion.

The small back roads from Madison's Montpelier to Jefferson's Monticello were narrow, winding, hilly - through the most luxurious farming land, surely, in all of North America: red soil, in loose, almost oily furrows, colors from deep russet to rust, to almost pure orange, with streaks of almost yellow - the sensuosity of those reds and the fierce green grass and the ancient looking trees of all varieties, in all shades of green, the flashes of white pillared mansions, even of an Elizabethan brick palace, on the hills hidden in huge oaks, with winding white rail fences marking the lanes, Aberdeen Angus cattle lying under the trees like panthers!

Then Monticello, Jefferson's house on the top of a hill from which you can see twenty miles in all directions at least, maybe to Washington when the day is clear. He planned the house, built it with nails and bricks made on his property, lived there with his wife and servants and two daughters for fifty or sixty years - his wife died after ten years, of course. From the letters displayed in the house it was obvious that he was a brilliant man, inventive, imaginative, but cold and sickeningly principled - one of the letters to his daughter Peggy when she was ten or eleven was little more than a lecture on decorum and propriety; I disliked him for that letter!

The house was classical, symmetrical, with beautiful windows at both ends that could be opened ingeniously into doors onto the garden. His apartment had a library, sitting room, study, sun porch, skylight, bedroom, upstairs closet, inset bed, revolving chair and revolving table. His wife's room and his daughter's rooms were single tight small rooms with set-in beds and fireplaces - not difficult to tell who was important in that family. The house shows an obsession with ingenious efficiency, but although it is beautiful in parts, it has very little charm.

The huge front hall with its perfect symmetry had on the ceiling what our ugly guide called an "iggle an' stahs" and a silly frieze of Etruscan-looking dragons, along with Classical Greek egg-and-dart. The slaves worked in kitchen, laundry and stable units half-buried in the ground. There was even a smoke house - now white-washed perfectly and hung with rather foul-smelling hams. The priv' was connected by underground passage to an outside opening in the garden, a pulley hauled a basin from the toilet to a handy slave through this passageway. The slave then cleaned up.

The garden had a fishpond - not for fun, but to keep fish fresh. The best things about Monticello now are the huge old trees, tulip poplars with yellow green tulip flowers and a copper beech. And the view out over that lush red farmland shaped into hill-slope plantations. I love the thought of Monticello - a place planned by one person, where everything, carriages, furniture, dinnerware pattern, curtains, is planned by the same man - and where little tricks like automatically opening dining room doors betray the man's ingenuity, but I don't like Jefferson himself much - his poor daughter.

After Monticello, another small road past Ash Lawn where Munro lived (another president). By now it was late afternoon. The farms became poorer, the soil grey-red, houses often more like the shanties of the south. At nightfall we were near Holiday Lake State Park near Appomattox - a camping spot on a hill with long-leaf pines and a big noise of bullfrogs below in the lake. I saw a water snake wriggling across the water with only its black head above the surface. I had thought it was the wet black nose of a little furry animal. The warden and his wife came up and talked for a long time about their subscriptions to magazines in a caricature of a Southern accent, "Law, ain't it jess' ."

I was fast asleep and seemed to be dreaming about a siren. I woke gradually to discover with terror that the siren-sound was real and was coming from my side of our tiny pup-tent - how-ooo, how-ooooooo, how-oooooo - very loud. "Greg, wake up, what's that noise." Greg, still asleep, "Oh I thought that was you." "Greg, I think it's a wolf," snuffling sounds outside near the ground, lapping sounds, "he's lapping at our dishwater." I got the flashlight, finally unzipping the door. We heard no more snuffling noises but we didn't hear it leaving either and I lay anxiously awake for a while expecting it to come through the canvas at my throat, hearing other howls in the distance. G says it was a dog.

Thursday

We were out by 6:30, half an hour later than yesterday. Just before Appomattox was another small square cemetery with thirteen small stone markers: twelve Confederate men and a Union man. Near here Lee surrendered to Grant, to end the Civil War - a metal plaque told how "7000 soldiers who had fought gallantly for the cause they believed to be right, were surrendered," etc. We picked a spray of lilac and soon found ourselves following school buses on back roads. At Brookneal we followed one load of white junior high school kids for a long time. They waved and smiled. In these early morning towns we saw mostly negroes, sitting on the wall in front of the courthouse, waiting on corners. Near South Boston we stopped for gas and coffee at a small country place. I said I wanted tea, please - he, the wide-mouthed mean looking Southern café manager, said incredulously, "Hawt tea?" As we were sipping and reading the local newspaper we saw two negro boys in another section of the café that had its own side door and was joined [to our side] only through a door into the kitchen - a jukebox from this section played loud soul music - it must have been a segregated café.

Row crops, sprouts hardly visible, must be tobacco.

Into North Carolina, on a bigger highway, motels and golf courses, a resort centre, Southern Pines, many long-needle pines on sandy soil, little farming. At Chapel Hill we'd bought apples at an IGA and had ridden past the university. Now we ate the apples and drove fast to get to Hunting Island by nightfall.

Got into Southern Carolina near Hamlet on the road to Cheraw. Toward central South Carolina, swamp country, black water, bogs and all. At Lake Marion nothing but huge billboards advertising motels and souvenir shops, pecan brittle at Lynch's, fireworks and alligator goods at Lloyd's, Pecan Pie Imported Free, Stuckey's candies and preserved kumquats. Live oaks with Spanish moss draggling like dirty beards from their branches. Santee, St George, Yemassee (Indians rose here and massacred Beaufort residents including Colonel Bull's wife), Gardens Corner and finally Beaufort with its white verandah mansions and fishing boats, and the bridge crossing the Sound toward Hunting Island, past very poor shacks (sharecroppers?) with many children spilling out of the one room onto crooked verandahs, the shacks usually set barefaced in the midst of a grey dusty field, but often with a decent car in the yard.

At last, Hunting Island, across a causeway running above reeds and feeding white herons. The road going back among palmetto and pine to the white sand beach and a good camping spot with water and two tables - sand, blackberries on the ground, green chameleons, 'coons knocking over the garbage the first night here (now we tie the can upright against a tree and old Coon gets in but can't knock it over), white crabs, a Marine helicopter, and a sturdy brown warden whose refrain when he collects money is "Good to see yew."

Friday

Woke up at 6 a.m. by habit and went down to look at the ocean sun coming dimly through the clouds, a grey mist and big rollers bringing in high tide. We went in and rocked with the big waves, washed around by foam and grey sunlight, knocked over by the heavy top of the waves as they heave over and smash into foam, disoriented, made dizzy by the conflicting directions of wave and undertow and the dizzy patterns of foam, and the sometimes dazzle of light coming flat onto the water from the sun nearly at the horizon.

Went to a country store across the causeway to get some white gas for the stove. There was a sunburned tattooed Marine with a fat chest, rows of candy in glass jars, brown bananas, postcards. We mailed Rudy's postcard from there. Then we got back and had breakfast and got out our big suitcase full of books. Greg is reading Omensetter's Luck by Gass, and I, Styron's Set This House on Fire, both very American books by American authors. Sat out reading them until noon, then went back out for a swimming lesson.

Sunbathing on the sand between the pickup-stick piles of palmetto and pine trunks uprooted by high tides and flung over on their sides. Five years ago a hurricane tore out a sandbar at the end of the island; with the sandbar gone, the current brings the waves into land with a fierce twist that eats up 100 feet of coast a year and sucks it into the sea. Black root-stubble makes swimming treacherous for 50' of beach at high tide and leaves hulks of grotesque sculpture at night when the tide is out and we can see fishing boat lights miles away. The Gulf Stream is only thirty miles out, the water is warm. Soft, wet winds after nightfall, smelling salty as clams.

Weekend campers beginning to set up, fires all along the strip of trees, huge shadows on the walls of tents with Coleman lanterns inside, putting the people inside on exhibition. Many very small children. And at the next campsite back, a strange accumulation of very ugly women, each with her own car. The typical specimen has short muscular legs, bottom and thighs fat as a drumstick, no bust and no waist, short prosaic hair, no makeup. Because they were so ugly I thought at first they must be a religious group (why else would so many ugly people band together?), then that they were perhaps nurses on holiday. But the level of humor they shrieked back at each other in their shrill Southern accents suggested a sub-nurse intelligence. More and more arrived - they ate and ate and laughed and turned on a 6-hour long tape of Perry Como and Chorus singing Old Favorites. They wore shockingly unbeautiful things - flamingo pink pedal pushers sweat-tight, and so on. Most of them had a queer hobbling running gait and gestures like aggressive men.

We stared at them for a while and they stared back and ate. We went to bed after reading inside the tent until late (ten) by the light of the Coleman lantern, to the sound of track #14 of Perry Como and Chorus on one side, the neighbour's daschund on the other, and a boy playing guitar near the rear flap.

Eggs-in-the-hole for dinner, Greg-made and good.

Saturday - swimming again, in the same magical early morning foam and mist. Bananas for breakfast, Greg finished his chili from the night before. More novel-reading and then a trip into Beaufort to buy groceries. At the Piggly Wiggly supermarket the parking lot was hot, packed, with hundreds of negroes leaning against the sides of their cars saying hello to their friends, watching each other going by all in their going-to-town clothes.

Inside, it was even more packed. We stood in line crushed with negro ladies, mostly very fat, nearly all the older ones in sneakers. Most wore cotton dresses and the really old ones wore hats with their sneakers. Young girls dress colorfully, sometimes with fishnet stockings very dramatic against their dark legs. One young girl wore a pink and white dress woven in silvered thread; another wore an old brocade cocktail dress with a brown lace overskirt sagging down past her knees. Some of the children are very pretty. The negroes' fat tends to be distributed differently than the whites' - it flows into huge rolling bottoms and breasts, where the white madame has padded shoulders and thighs and a round stomach, but flat bottom and breasts.

Eventually we got out - a pale blue beautiful sunhat, $1.19, I bought - we looked for a straw hat for Greg but didn't find one and I pretended to be mad at his reticence - then we went back to the public library, a cool place full of magazines, and read - then, on the advice of the old veteran on crutches who took charge of the desk, went several streets over to see the church of St Helena parish (1715) with its graveyard - peace, trees, old brick walls around family plots, flat tombs, a few little brick houses. The church very simple and beautiful with its doors open onto the green garden and someone playing the organ - plaques on the wall paying tribute to church members, one of them a young lieutenant in the Confederate forces, killed in 1866, who had been a vestryman.

Heat and quiet in the town, huge white or brick houses along the reedy oyster-smelling waterfront, some of them almost hidden by the trees planted centuries ago and hung with moss in thick weedy curtains.

On the way back to Hunting Island a stop at the Itty Bitty Pet Farm to buy a cold watermelon from a revolting ex-Marine, tattooed like the other one, full of hearty good cheer and reeking bad jokes. His 'pet farm' had a possum though, fast asleep with five or six babies in a fur ball. A 'coon in the next cage prowled back and forth in front of the wire, clawing out with his nervous small hands, pacing and clawing, looking frantic.

Back at camp, I cut the watermelon (large) in half and ate all of it, the WHOLE watermelon, by myself (Greg doesn't like it), reading and spitting seeds at the same time, very happy. I've always wanted an unshared watermelon. Meanwhile Greg ate a whole bag of peanuts.

More of those girls next door, even uglier, more new cars, more shouts, more Perry Como. Are they phys ed teachers, to be so hefty? No, they'd be in better shape.

Those people down the row, in the Nomad trailer, are watching television. Wind tonight, a full moon scraping through thin fast clouds, noise of waves, all those fires, I've finished the book, it was good and I'm lonely.

Sunday

Swim again, early, to wash off the stickiness of a hot morning and a sandy bed. Jell-O Instant Pudding for breakfast, different packages for each of us, chocolate for Greg. We're both burned in patches and I've come out in my usual salt-water spring rash but my face is tanned and has lost its lumpish winter look. While Greg is away phoning his parents, one of the neighbours comes over, the woman with the three pretty children, to talk. Her husband is taking a Famous Writer's Course because he wants to retire at thirty five, two years from now. The woman is a Yankee but she's lived in South Carolina for six years and thinks the negroes are so lazy, "We don't want people like that to have rights." She has taken a Napoleon Hill self-improvement course but she's quite attractive, slim and in good shape. So is her husband.

I see that one of the ugly females is there alone now, broiling steaks, so I go over to ask her. Obvious - they are woman Marines, based at Parris Island near here, a famous recruiting depot, where the men are disciplined so they'll be able to land on any beach in the world, etc. Nearly everyone has packed up and gone away, they have to be at work tomorrow.

- At night, a fire under two palmettos and a pine. Marshmallows and queer grey American wieners, pine leaves moving very lightly in black silhoette above, rows of thin tall pine stems and short palm trunks with the typical burst of stiff leaves at the top, broken dry leaves hanging down, dry flower stalks breaking the round form like an invasion from another plant. There are a few other fires, but no Perry Como, no television. Greg talks about baseball as we sit with our backs against a palm looking into the fire with arms around each other. A very big moon lying behind the row of trees across the road lining the beach, thin low clouds running past it but not managing to cover it

May 19

[letter]

We came back today to find piles of mail stuffed under our door, sat and spread it on the black table and read it - now it's long past our usual sleeping time: 10:30. Lilacs in the living room, Schumann and Kinderscenen, the garden still outside the bedroom window, dim flowering bushes and the thought of the summer's bicycle at night. It's a good house and I'm excited. Greg and I have been happy, maybe more than ever.

June

[journal]

I came home from Montreal on the train this morning; it was raining as I came to the station but I felt happy because of both Madeleine and Peter - and even the apartment and Jean-Claude and Maria and Francois with his drunk angry Ida. Even now lying in Greg's bed wondering if I'm pregnant, I feel the sleeplessness at the pit of my stomach as a fullness and a loss. The row of heavy buildings standing wet under this morning's sky close to the train and then passing further on the locus of a slow curve - webs of concrete roadway white-on-blue. Myself back to the rear wall with a seat to myself, walking with my shoulders back, feeling my cheek line in its place, fencing glances. And then writing what I will recopy later, with the excitement stirring in my stomach all the way to Kingston through the crisp bland morning country wet and green like celery.

When I came into Montreal on Saturday it was the same - wet country, and then the uneven line of black buildings, and the mountain. St André with dirty children flinging garbage at each other beside a corner store. 975 at the top of a winding outside stairway, Mad come to the door in a sarong, naked underneath it. Richard Partington looking as though he'd sucked his cheeks in, moving beautifully (his friend Jean-Claude and he walking away to telephone on Sunday, the same size, shaped nearly alike with their hard shoulders and square buttocks, Richard in the kitchen this morning, moving lightly on the balls of his feet, wearing a black sweater and white pants). I was feeling kisses on my lower lip just now - that was later. Mad and I drank wine. Bill McGee came in in black with a black lace tie, needing only a long thin moustache and a forked beard - with him was a boy whose name I didn't remember, who looked slant-lashed and young, like a young Greek homosexual who never surely existed. Mad and Richard and I went to a Greek dinner in what was almost a taverna, almost with sawdust on the floor.

6th June

[journal]

Harcourt tonight showed Culloden to a group of friends - I went in my Bill McGee pants, black sweater, black shawl, black scarf, toreador shoes. Harcourt spoke to me in the hall, sitting on a bench, with his hair shiny - I wanted to touch it and him. He said "We have our best conversations in halls. A kind of charge builds up the times between these few conversations." He didn't look at me as he spoke. I wanted to put my arms around him.

Upstairs Arnold was across the room, as I looked for him and started across toward him, confusion of two people giving up their seats so I could sit beside him. Both of our faces lit. I recalled my dream last night - it was startling to see his face like it. He had come upstairs sweating after trying unsuccessfully to make Judy - I was jealous, yelled at him for not wanting me - then he was gone but he came back troubled, wanting to make up - it was like Al's "I thought of you more as a person." As the light went off for the first reel I said "I dreamed about you last night." Then the roar of drums, bagpipes, battle. As they came on again he said "Was it a good dream?"

He wrote some notes in the library upstairs, I went onto the balcony and sang some jazz. We walked back here, planned lights, ate carrot sticks and cheese, talked, finally put the table between us. Talked of being nervous with each other, laughed, felt close eventually, smoked a cigarette between the two of us and touched hands passing it, with only one light left in the corner. His room in Winnipeg, rubber plant and piano, paintings. When he left he said "I feel good." Catfish escaped when he opened the door, "I'm sorry the magic is gone" as a joke. A moment when I took back the cat that was close, him going downstairs, "That was a mean thing to say, 'The magic is gone.'" Something is moving so that I can get to people now.

[undated letter]

Again, and this seems to be true every time I've written you lately, I've just come back from a Toronto weekend. Greg had arranged to go to a concert in Stratford (Duke Ellington) on Sunday afternoon with a friend and I went along as far as Toronto. (On the way we stopped near Peterborough to buy wild blueberries at a road stand, "picked off the mountain," behind a shack by a nine year old and his brother.

Toronto - saw Paul, Joanne, Jay, Tony Tugwell and his Andrea, Victoria.

Paul is such good company. They had just received letters from you. The red carbon is very difficult to read.

I haven't said anything about your scholarship! Greg phoned me at work when he got the mail in the morning and I ended up announcing the news to the roomful of research assistants. Peter Dyck was very pleased and said he would send you a medal. He's very affectionate to Christine - they act very newlywed and he's astonishingly sweet. As Paul says, it happens to all our best madmen. You'll see him in Edmonton next year and you'll like Christine although I don't, very much, mostly because she has tamed Peter and thereby ruined our electricity I suppose.

How good for you that you can go to stay in Edmonton with Rudy!

One of my last year's philosophers, Sartre, says that when a person actively realizes that he is a set of possibilities and not a role set or expected by others - in other words, when he sees clearly that even in whatever situation he is he chooses himself and must constantly reevaluate and decide what he wants to be - then he lives creatively and often in great uncertainty and anxiety. Inevitably, because he realizes how important, unique, and fragile his own life is to him - and that no choice once made can ever be irrevocable - he has to constantly rechoose it or else change. But he is responsible for himself.

I have some reservations about Sartre and existentialism generally, but the painfulness of freedom is easy to understand. But maybe your painfulness is your unfreedom to get away from what you hate or at least are alienated from. Maybe you need to think about whether or not you don't hate or resent coming back to the old narrow life, maybe your resentment comes out in a rash. It seems clear and logical to me but I know that my own hatred for that life makes it seem maybe over obvious to me. But anyway, maybe there is something to the freedom and anxiety hypothesis in your case, because now that you've become the 'me' person it has always been your right to be, you are vulnerable to the resentments and high-strungnesses of 'me' people. Congratulations.

About the letter to Kelvin that you sent me a carbon of, no I haven't been avoiding the subject - just waiting for a time with more time. Your analysis of Father's identification with his mother and the conflict following it, and causing him to deny himself. When you say he had urges toward self destruction after the mill failed, do you mean that he thought about suicide? When you say "During this time part of me died that took years to bring back to life again" what do you mean exactly? (I know partly.)

I never realized that all our going-without, the sordidness of the way we lived, was a sacrifice of what we had toward having more - I always sincerely thought it was there-just-isn't-any. No wonder we don't really like to accept things from Father now - it would be a little like accepting repayment of a loan never agreed to in the beginning and accepting as payment what is only a token and not the full price at all. Rather righteous indignation, than token justice!

Donne - I love his language, his "batter my heart." You talk of the "woman who, desiring to be loved and freed from an intolerable relationship, yet feels she must be imprisoned in order to be kept to the man."

I gather you prefer Blake to Browning? I've always liked Browning's way of making truth personal rather than absolute - it is the struggle and conflict that interest me - the "white radiance of eternity" has never held any appeal to me at all. (For more examples of Browning's way of making truth personal and partial you may have time someday to read Durrell's Alexandria Quartet - a favorite of Judy and Paul as well as me. Paul was mentioning his enjoyment of the last two books on Sunday.) (Maybe one of the courses in English you take next year could be a modern novels course. I don't know if you'd like it or if you're ready for it - you'd learn from it though - and I'd be eager to hear your response to some of those I find so expressive myself or parts of myself or my potential future self.)

Anyway, like Browning, it is the individual personality that prevents me from seeing anything appealing in an absorption into the being of God. Strangely, even when I was at my most religious as a child, the idea of God never interested me, only an intense self consciousness of what was expected of me in behaviour, thoughts, dedication, etc. (Caliban upon Setbos with its brilliant characterization of the barely emerged brain - if it can be said to have a character at all - and its perfect choice of words is my favorite Browning poem.)

I know nothing about Blake and so haven't given him a chance to convince me, but for me opacity, finitude, separation, physicality are not demonic but themselves dynamic and creative. I tend to evaluate a poet's philosophic value by his ability to sing finitude, separation, and the physical - his "negative capability" which is Shelley's phrase meaning the ability to live without despair or credal commitment but to create without them, out of the material of ambiguities, mysteries, dusty answers and inconsistencies themselves. (That was Stauffer on Yeats, partly.) And I love Yeats for that reason. Or listen to Durrell in Bitter Lemons: "We had become, with the approach of night, once more aware of loneliness and time - those two companions without whom no journey can yield us anything."

- But your Browning and Blake is an excellent essay, well written and well thought out - so you do have a logical mind!

Greg will give you his own comments on the sociology paper - it must have been an absorbing process of thinking-out. Everybody should be able to learn to do sociological analysis of their own cultural roots I think. What interested you most in the paper? I can guess - it was the sections about the church learning to become religious again after so many years of being a reactionary cultural rather than emotional bond.

I've been a long time writing partly because I've been preoccupied with personal problems - the usual - getting along with people. But the problem has changed a little. This time it is not the old business of disliking everyone, but rather of liking several people and not knowing what to do about it. I don't know how much I've told you. There's Peter Harcourt, who I love and to whom I am special. There is also physical attraction, rare for me, to complicate our ability to be friends easily, as we'd like to be, as well as the fact that he is an extremely complex person and makes me more complex when I'm with him.

I also like and admire his wife, who is a beautiful and intelligent woman who unfortunately grew up with a ridiculously low sense of her own value and at the same time a fierce self possessive pride. She's thirty six, nearer your age than mine, but she says she identifies with me. At the same time I have trouble getting easily closer to her as well, I'm not sure why, I think perhaps because she overvalues or overestimates me in some ways. Or I don't know why.

Then there is Marilyn Cox, married to one of Greg's very young politics professors. I babysit her two beautiful girls, four and five years old. She's a graduate student in English, doing her Masters thesis on a woman novelist I like very much, Doris Lessing. She's very pretty, bright, imaginative - a gourmet cook, a charming conversationalist - but she has a reserve I can't thaw. And then there is Arnold Desser, a graduate student in English as well. Thin, black-bearded, nervous, ambitious - he's going to the London School of Film Technique and has already done an educational film, in Manitoba. He's from Winkler - one of the members of the Jewish community there existing rather uneasily beside the Mennonite community. We understand, like, and stimulate each other, but he is uncomfortable because of Greg (I suppose because the liking and understanding and stimulation has a definite and delightful male-female undertow) and so doesn't act easily and casually as a friend either. It flatters me in a way, but I miss him when he's nervously overcompensating by talking only to Greg.

And Greg - there are times when he's preoccupied with his work and I miss him - or (because he can't be everything to me, not even him! when I miss what he isn't and wish for a somebody with a something-I-don't-know-what).

This long long sheet is a contribution to you from my working life - it is computer type-out paper that is ordinarily fed into the computer keyboard automatically. More next week. Very busy.

9 July

Greg away in Ottawa - Peter Harcourt on the telephone, the smiling tension of us both - my skin radiant with steam - he challenges me, his stubborn painful nibbling at me. I want to touch him, begin by putting a hand along the inside of his forearm tomorrow as we walk to the faculty club, sometime lie beside him in the dark exchanging intimacies about our good lives, comfortable for once, not so comfortable all the time but only on special nights. I've begun to think about affairs, taking it for granted that I'm married well enough now to be unfaithful in my way - I suppose a faithful way; Peter Harcourt, first choice. What could I give him - I know tenderness, I could make him feel himself body under the baggy things he wears. What could we have - after a while I'd be comfortable with him, I could laugh at him. Sometime surely I will be someone's mistress, I don't feel ready for Peter, I'd need to be with him going across a country in a car, with my knee along his flank like the first brilliant day with Rasheed going west. Our tension is like the first days in the strawberry field with Frank - it would go away if he assumed, like Frank, that we must be lovers. Frank at the beginning - when he put his arms around me on the last day of the berry season and I watched from behind my own left shoulder, impassive. I know how to cherish a man since then. I could cherish Peter Harcourt without needing his patience as I need Greg's, because of Greg. And I could tell Greg about it, Peter could tell Joan. After all, I do feel grown up enough, I wonder if I should do anything. He would have to avoid scandal, my university professor. Mad makes me ambitious - but if it would make Joan unhappy? No it would have to be a cherishing holiday that we could leave whistling when we went home. There is next winter. I could grow out of my petulance at not being his first last only most important. That soprano-trumpet Jauchtzet Gott in Allen Länden, what I would be if I could. Greg came home from Victoria full of things for me; I sobbed stiffly in my corner because of my imperfect body; he said, "Now can't I just love you."

11 July

Woke up early from an uneasy sleep this morning, Peter Harcourt putting his arms around me saying "It's me, Peter."

Fine thin body soft at the middle, a strange boy shape coming back from the bathroom with the red hall light behind him. The incessant movement of his hand pushing across my breasts or over my bottom, worrying me because it seemed automatic. And this morning when I only wanted to sleep - in his gentle way he made my body tense toward him in spite of my uncourageous desire to turn my back and go to sleep.

It worked, I feel easier with him. I think he may feel less easy.

At the Faculty Club at lunch, on the steps, I asked him if I should have asked him to see me when he telephoned - implicit agreement to be something personal to him at last. He came to Cox's when I was babysitting, sat across the room and drank three large scotches. Marilyn and David came back, I had given ambivalent cues - told them all that Greg wasn't' coming back from Ottawa until today or tomorrow but insisted on wanting to go to Patrick's house to see "Bill McGee's friend." Peter Harcourt - silly man! - said he would drive me. His car was at home of course. We would put the bicycle in the back. In the meantime I should leave it on the grass. Had I seen the newly furnished furniture? I must come in.

The piano room, he plays a little Bach and explains it, but I become restless. He says he's tight, and he's on a monologue that cheats me. I'm nearly squeezed off the bench. He won't play Sati, can't find him, can't play him. Shouldn't play Mozart in this state. "Danny understand me better than Joan does, Joan knows it and it annoys her." His friend in London that I would like.

Went upstairs, were turning off lights in the hall. He said "I want to put my arms around you" in his blurred flat foxy voice. We stood leaning together at the door and he said "I want you to stay here with me, do you know that?" I said I wanted him to come to my place and it was both because of the Bach and the blue blanket and what I had written, and because I would feel stronger there. He said he wanted to have me there "because it's a place I know" but would come. "But we won't try too hard," I said. "I'm glad you said that because (what?) maybe we'll just hug each other."

He was funny about insisting on getting the bicycle himself, I held it with one hand as we drove in his turquoise open car, it looked like a strange spoked propeller, the one wheel standing crookedly upright above the back seat. Feeling of a strange trip, unreality and silliness of our getting into a car and putting a bicycle into the back in order to go to bed. But at my place I became brisk, snapping on lights, winding the clock, pulling curtains "but leaving a little so we can see what kind of day it is tomorrow," finding the record, stringing out the long speaker cord and finally throwing my clothes into the basket after having cut off his beginnings of taking my clothes off. Sat on the end of the bed not looking as he took his off.

Then we rolled together awkwardly, we were worried and strange. He lay back and talked with the back of his hand on his forehead; I don't remember myself, I think I was passive and quiet. He said he was confused, all his women were mindless, that was what he liked about them; save respect for Joan, his woman. "If I were twenty five I'd ask you to be my woman. I wouldn't be any good for you if I were twenty five." He was gentle, insincere, clever, like Mike, seductive, but sometimes himself as if blindly.

When I had listened impatiently to his monologue on the piano bench, he said, finally, "We were talking, before, but I can't, now." He seemed surprised at my - willingness? Energy, to begin with? He is definite about important feelings as though they were unimportant - "I loved you that night, tonight too." "She said she hated me for three years." "I guess I've been in love with you since the beginning" - like our afternoon row around the lake: when he was rowing without talking, I asked what he was thinking, he said "How lovely you are," but mechanically, so that I was chilled, but the lake water ran in its many colors close in by the shore where the trees reflect - the islands with their pine trees, black fish over the slab of rock slanting out from the island, where the water was warm and yellowish; his skin is freckled and brown, I remembered the car ride toward Lost Bay Lake, farms, clover, colts, children piling hay in the heat, things I had wanted to exclaim to him, improvising a blues lyric in the back seat to myself - and felt happy in spite of his chilling "How lovely you are."

What it was like that night, morning, afternoon - I hardly remember. When he put his arms around me it never occurred to me that I might not want to stay with him. It certainly was not lust - that is for myself as posterity - but relief - we'll lie in bed together without clothes and at last the tension will be gone, we'll be bedded down, immobile and committed to our immobilization for at least tonight, good, we'll see.

So he came, silent ride, will it rain? The narrow stairway - how do my legs look from the back? What does he see? That hitching movement when I move onto my right foot? The light, the record, what did we say, "This is my room, there's my life on the wall." "I always have my own room too."

While whipping my clothes off I caught a glimpse of myself in the mirror - waist curving in sharply when I was bare to the waist. How did that come about. "What are you doing?" "Stringing out the speaker so we can listen in bed."

Small embrace by the window and he begins to unbutton my blouse - I never thought he'd like to, only that slow undressing is awkward, get the shyness over, I'm not being seduced, I'm leaping. There he is, hanging, but he does have a hard-on. Talks incoherently in bed, his language is repetitive and strange, "those shits." Gradually he's back.

Sunday

All of these days are mixing here and in my mind, repetitions, the drive through Gananoque, through Lansdowne, almost to the marina and then down the crooked hardtop road, then the gravel road and finally the trail down to the lake, the same smells of clover and of evergreen, the same rising euphoria half made of the uncertainty of seeing Peter again and not knowing what to expect or offer - with happiness because of the last time I saw him. They weren't there.

But this evening he came - I'm sleepy - sat on a black chair by the table, I moved from chair to stool to floor to kitchen to get milk, he stayed where he was and only when Greg went to the library, moved to the chair above my footstool and put his hand over mine and said "I don't know what to do with you - whether I should hug you or whether it would infringe." I sat on his lap, looked at his beautiful face, solemnity, blue pointed eyes, rust-freckle-tan face, untouched, awake, new. He said "I know I overvalue you, because of the idealization, women but at the same time I think I really see you." "She says she doesn't feel safe with me." "It was the same at breakfast. I felt you would be ready to define it negatively then unless I defined it very positively."

So Tuesday - it has occurred to me for the first time that I might make the journal work, or rather that I might make it a work for myself - disciplined work that I do against myself but for something.

A failure of nerve about Peter. Joan did it, I don't know if purposely. We went to the lake to see if she was unhappy, and she said "Peter's affairs are an occupational hazard of being married to him." "He says he doesn't remember anything about your night together." "He has always been looking for the woman who would be stimulating, and at the same time feel about sex like a man. I don't think he has ever found her."

She was wearing a teeshirt and light blue jeans, hair in two tails, tanned arms, tanned face, bare feet. Pretty. Open? I said "And you too, because I like you and I don't know what to do about it." She said, "That's fine, because I like you and I don't know what to do about it." I'm desolate and have disappointed Greg again, by sleeping in my own room among the moths and spiders and cats.

Thursday

See three pages written at work. Must write that at the cottage Joan took us silent (me nervous) through the house to the chairs, spread towels on them because there had been a storm (we had it on the 401), poured us wine, and Greg finally said "Well we thought we should come out and see you," and I leapt, "I had assumed you didn't mind but Lawford took me aside yesterday and said you did, so I didn't want to talk to him anymore and so we came to see what you really think." And she said very slowly with her glass in her hand "Well Lawford was wrong and you were right," then that terrible line about occupational hazards.

We talked about ourselves and about her marriage and the times she doesn't tell Peter about (if I used this to think about her I might be able to make her feel more herself, what Peter says - what Harcourt says - she does for us all). She is funny!

As he says, "sense of ceremony can lend to what might otherwise be a commonplace scene the feeling of intense personal involvement," "importance of ritual in combating," that is his linear thinking. Dear Peter Harcourt, those pointed eyes are completely corner to corner, he has no iris distinctly, only pointed blue steady burning out of that copper brown face.

Sunday morning

Dream: a white shape growing larger coming to the surface of the water along a beach, swimming up like a fish - became a boat drawn up on the beach, beautifully constructed with a metal plate under the prow, pointed outward. Across the water a long thin line of ground, island or shore, trees, groups of people in twos or threes staring across toward us, facing forward in a line, men hanging by their necks from low branches of the trees, profile toward us. We were to cross toward them, we didn't want to, we were there among the people who had now turned toward us, someone told us we were to stand hip to hip and dance, we ground quietly along as he told us to, and I noticed that the faces were similar, white, plain, quiet, individual but all undistinguished, a blond with thin eyebrows. All had shadows around the eyes, lips strongly outlined, I realized they were dead.

Later a long Viking ship seemed drawn up along the flank of our dancing group. The sound of arrows - I realized that the dead were flying into position on the ship as long shining wire rigging, individually. I knew that I would also become one of the wires, felt myself fly through the air and saw the rigging around me bright as tinsel in a pattern of very strong thin wires - not as an actual rigging but as a web that covered the ship from stern to prow in a complex pattern of peaks - but I think only lengthwise - the pattern was not so much that of peaks but of strings in a many-stringed musical instrument with a high bridge.

Wednesday, last day of July

A high wind, the water is roaring under the soft steady scratching of leaves outside the window of my room. Coffee yogourt half frozen, Greg in the next room reading before he sleeps. In the living room, black table and chairs, a jar of dill on the table showing brighter green at the bottom through the glass and water, a small glass of furry purple flowers, the row of green bottles along the window ledge some with flowers and some empty. Mad's butterfly.

Mad was here since Saturday night, with Pierre Léger, his ugly face with the long nose, his mouth in profile, the row of stitches under his eye looking like ashes or cancer, his thin hair flat and stiff over his ears - stains like milk stains on his bellbottoms, smart rust brown jacket elegantly cut long, yellow large collared shirt and Madeleine's printed blue and purple scarf as cravat. The smile, the smell of decay, his thin long legs, round shoulders, flat square bottom. Mad wrote "And in the morning he knew how to move me although I had to keep my eyes closed because of that face." Going away, this afternoon, Pierre kissed me ritualistically front, side, opposite side - while Mad came around and kissed my neck, twice, smiling like the da Vinci St John the Baptist when I turned. Pierrot's poem attached.

I've put on the wall one of the Gauguin prints Mad gave me this afternoon (with Laura Nyro singing) with "I like you so much and I've hardly seen you at all. I'm not going to come like this again." - A dark brown girl sitting naked in a blue chair, legs crossed, arms along the sides of the chair, face forward. She's shaped like Mad, there's a monkey at her feet which is a Mad-object and not one of mine. Most of the weekend she wore her dirty purple shirt and my striped skirt, bare feet, wild hair.

My head is full of pictures -

Arnold cut me at the film - Ivan the Terrible Part II.

My journals from age twelve are full of men - Father, the dream boys in black leather jackets, Frank, Jerry, Peter Dyck, Greg, Don - and those other things which I barely understand now - Peter Martillo and the yeast infection I've got from him! I don't know what I was doing - those others a little like it, irrational, literary stupid things that turned out badly - Alain, Jean-Jacques Gaté, Charles, Ferdinand. Bill. People like Rasheed and Alain and Jean-Jacques I do understand, it wasn't all literary, no. Respect and compassion because somethings in them got to me, they were real to me. Now - Peter Martillo, stupidity, but why was I casting around away from Greg? Suddenly Peter Harcourt. Suddenly Arnold Desser. All of those new leaves larded into my book - new man leaves! I want (yes!) to tell Arnold "You are him. Because of your surprises and your Jewish take-offs and your seriousness and your idiot laugh and your ugly eyes you're him."

William Street, September 3, Tuesday

Eventually he stayed as long as he could, but by now he is back in Toronto at his sister's house. His plane leaves early Saturday morning. How am I going to remember how he felt this morning and at noon when I moved my hands over him to remember.

Monday

A week I don't remember exactly. My room is different. We had the narrow bed in the alcove, where the sun and flies found us by seven in the morning, and where I could see him as soon as I opened the door at noon. I would wake with his bare back next to me and his face grimacing because of the flies that landed on his ear, his arm. Stiff hair like paintbrush bristles, separated into stiff tufts when he woke, stiff beard too, but thin and curled so that it lay away from his face in stiff curves and swirls with skin showing under it. Mouth with a ridge along its lower lip, making a slanted ledge. Oil on his ugly blunt nose, ringed eyes opening, usually crossly, as I waited to see what the mood would have become during the night, with our perilous achieved peace of the night before lost into nothing, to remake. That Monday night my resentment at his not seeming to care that it was our last, I sat looking at the fountain until it was too cold, was in the bathtub and wouldn't play when he came in with what he later called his one-man happy show. Revolting. Fraudulent. I brushed my hair fiercely, he mocked, joked, but finally was silent too. He said come lie down beside me and I did but he seemed not really to want me there. Finally - "Why do you have to choose tonight to feel separate?" With the familiar desolate cramped stomach.

We managed to grope back together again and we made love - he was especially pleased, more than ever, and I held onto him, happy that he had been so happy - we had made something. But then we worked at me - and I was humiliated at having to be worked at so long, felt as though I had destroyed the mood, destroyed the achievement. He was impatient and we went to sleep. I woke from a bitter dream of saying angry goodbye to a boy I didn't know, didn't recognize.

Had to go to work, was angry, still tasting the bitterness of the dream in my mouth, didn't kiss A as I left although I wasn't sure he would be there when I came back. But through the morning I became increasingly happy and certain, until, at eleven, I rushed back to William Street to find him still sleeping, the sun moved further along the wall. I held him, his back was turned, and when he woke for a minute, I left - bought coffee, milk, grapes, pears in the market, buns and cinnamon rolls - and came back overflowing with something, happiness at his being there, so that I could bring him food, happiness because of the day with its sun and the leaves turning red on the maple across from my kitchen window. Made the café-au-lait, put pears and grapes into the glass bowl and sat with my foot on his, eating with him. He was silent but I loved him exuberantly. Do you realize that I'm sitting here smiling to myself because it's noon and this is completely platonic and I really love you. He was a little desolate. I wanted to hold him fiercely (joyfully) but I said I feel so much like roughing you up. Don't rough me up. Should I gentle you? Gentle me. So I held him and didn't mind his sad quiet separateness at that moment, but held him and gentled him, hands all along his body, the hook at his hip, the curve along his side, his neck and forearm, his thin hard shanks, his squared-off bottom. The solid white-flesh wings covering his breastbone queerly (his Nureyev pose!).

Then when he went into the bathroom to dress I suddenly felt the beginning of the familiar desolation myself and I was out the door, the fifteen minutes are up, goodbye, and down the stairs, door shut. But he ran after me and jumped off the step, got to my bicycle before me; we had smiled during the chase. But he was serious - shoulder against mine. "Thanks." Taxi driver stopped before crossing the street. Have a good day. Have a good life. He walked back and past the door down the street, didn't look back as I got onto the bicycle and rode away.

But I looked back. He was moved, the line of his shoulders.

I wondered, when I came home, whether he would have left the note - the words to "In My Life" typed carefully and put into an envelope with my name on it - he had - he was gone - and there was the guitar dressed and stuffed to look like me, with shawl, flower, Mexican dress, bulging round breasts, little fork legs. He ran down the steps calling "But I still have something to tell you."

Tuesday September 10

Greg comes, hangs around, is lonely for me but I am indifferent; he sat on the edge of the tub as I sanded and scrubbed, insisted (but quietly) that I take him seriously.

There is such a strong detailed insistent pattern around him, all the time we had; his face and its expression now comes to me immediately and sharply because I know it so well. I really love Greg - I should be able to keep him as well. I'll lose him to his next woman or to a year without seeing him.

I'm afraid that my month with Arnold wasn't long enough, that he has been able to go away without taking an image of me that reminds him of the lack of me. I don't know whether I want him to remember me or not - remember, yes, impatiently, I admit that he will for a while - but to long for me? I only long for him from time to time, and then safely, without deciding whether I would have stayed with him or whether he would have wanted to stay with me, or whether I would have wanted to work at having him want to stay with me. It has occurred to me that I would have, to both . It has never occurred to me before. I was hurt when he said, that Sunday afternoon in my room at Maitland, You're good, you're not marrying good, but you're good. Now - this came to me in the middle of my explaining it to Greg - I've discovered a small suggestion of alternative in myself and I must learn about it, I was something different with Arnold, but it changed.

My room sets up echoes of him - I write a little nearly every night. Echoes of what we said, what we might have said, wanted to say, should have said. Desser.

Saturday

Greg has a new girl and I'm hurt. She has a moist nineteenth century young sort of sexiness, long red hair, warm skin, pointed blue eyes. I found him at her place this morning, drinking tea: thin body with a big bottom, little breasts, no underclothes. He kept darting looks at her and seems happy. I feel betrayed - my face has been looking so battered these last days, twenty three seems old and I an ugly twenty three - he really should have loved me more to make up for my loving him too little, what does he know about it all, he's well adjusted and modern and has never had a feeling for more than fifteen minutes. I'm hurt because it comes so easily to him - he sees, lusts for, reaches for, misses or succeeds, is delighted by female bodies and so uncomplicatedly can enjoy them. It's so easy for him and so difficult and rare for me.

I stopped to see him one evening when I was living with Arnold and noticed a pocketbook he was reading lying on his bed, sat down and began to read it. Pornography - spankings, voyeurism, master-servant, three-at-a-time, all in powdered wigs in some French chateau. Effective - I was bottom-warmed and giggling when Greg came in, and I said something like "Look what I found!" "For Christ's sake!" he shouted with so much humiliation and pain in his voice that I realized what I had done in abandoning him sexually; I realized it with complete surprise - I was shocked at my own tactlessness, naivete. I was touched by Greg, as I'm always touched, stricken a little, when he really feels pain, he does it so simply, without any self dramatization.

The morning in summer when I heard on the radio that Robert Kennedy had been shot and was in critical condition - I was in the big chair at 28 Maitland Street, morning light coming off the lake through the window. Greg came in; I said "Listen." He sat on the arm of the chair and listened in silence. Then his big heavy body went rigid and he began to cry. I put my arms around him and he lay against me heavily, leaning into me without any reserve. I held him and felt his tears on my neck, feeling great tenderness for him, but no grief of my own.

When I went to work I could not stay in the room with the radio repeating its accounts of the shooting like a bewildered crowd. The people in the office came to ask why I'd gone away alone, defensively as though I had rejected them - refused to include them in something important in my life. I was surprised that they understood so well.

Then one night Greg said "We aren't young anymore" - because of Kennedy, the South, Viet Nam: he said it so honestly, so sadly, that I respected him and honoured him - felt a little as though he were the priest dispatching a terrible, necessary, ritual; self-elected, brave enough to choose and pronounce the ceremony of recognition: "We aren't young any more."

Agee in a letter to Father Flye, 28 June 1938: "This may simply mean that he who moves beyond the safety of the rules finds himself inevitably in the 'tragedy' of the 'human situation,' which rules have been built to avoid or anaesthetize, and which must be undertaken without anaesthetic; but I am suspicious of laying pity and grief and sadness to such a general, fatal source rather than to a source for which I am personally responsible." And "sexual love as sacrament and one of the close centres of existence." And "Gaiety is the sign of the intelligent man."

I get lonely for A when I see his women - when I sat beside Bronwen [Wallace] at The General Line tonight and saw her cat-yellow hair and her narrow shoulders I wanted to put my arms around her.

I thought especially of the night he came back - we were on the roof and felt separate, I walked down the fire escape onto the lower roof - that was the beginning of the misery half of our loving. He went inside, into my place; and eventually I went back up the iron stairs, into the hall, down the steps and out of the building and began to run toward Maitland Street. When I had reached the next block Arnold called me from the corner and as I stopped to look back at him, came toward me. He took my wrist and led me back, all the way to my room, neither of us saying anything. But I felt as though I had been reached; we had done something.



raw forming volume 8


raw forming volume 7: august 1967 - september 1968
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