raw forming volume 6 part 3 - 1967 february-may  work & days: a lifetime journal project

[undated letter, February]

It's good to think of you going to school every morning on the bus and I'm amused in a nice way to think that my birthday present helped to outfit you.

And you want to know about Bill? It may reassure you to know that the sweater was from Dorothy Volk as well; I suspect that she picked it out. But why would he want to send me something so expensive? 1. He has lots of money and no children. 2. He had to work his way through college in Brooklyn, was very poor as a student, and couldn't get scholarships because there weren't any. It took him seven years to get through the four-year course because he had to go to night school. 3. He loves me. Partially, he identifies with me because in a sense he's doing what someone should have done for him; I'm ambitious as he was; I'm climbing out of the same sort of environment that he had to struggle to get out of.

That's only part of it tho because the way he loves me isn't fatherly - it was almost miraculous that someone as young as I and someone as old as he could become such close friends, but we did - we had a relationship with a great deal of trust and respect and more than a little excitement of discovery in it. What you want to know is: did we sleep together - yes. We didn't make love partly because of mutual loyalty to his wife (with whom he has an excellent marriage) and partly because I don't think he could have if he'd wanted to; but when we went on weekend excursions we slept in the same bed.

He is a good person, and he is good in a sense that almost any moral Christian I can think of is not good: he doesn't fool himself about his motives or about the essential loneliness and selfishness of people, but in his dealings with them he gives them his sincerity, his very serious desire not to hurt them, and his tolerance of their right to have a personality unlike his. Consequently he can have an encounter with them and he can love them. You've seen his picture and you've seen his face. How many moral people you know have a face as beautiful as his at his age? I respect him, and I love him too - you and he are people who give me some confidence that to mature is not necessarily to become more bitter and more unconscious and more intolerant. And he has gone even further than you because he's managed completely without religion. I want to keep him for a friend as long as he lives, and if I ever have any children I want him to consider them as grandchildren.

I was angry when you said "It isn't that I have a dirty mind, but if you were my mother wouldn't you wonder?" You do have a dirty mind - you have a dirty mind because you think that sex without marriage is sinful and scandalous, and I suspect you're not sure it isn't sinful and scandalous after marriage as well. And Father has an even dirtier mind than you do: with all his obsession about sex in any form and with all his righteous wrath and with his pride in his own chastity as a young man I think he has one of the dirtiest minds I have ever encountered - of course it isn't his fault, and of course I'm being unjustly hard on him, but his righteous unable-to-face-reality, unable-to-face-himself, unable-to-tolerate-others mind is dirty: the false virtue is supposed to cover his lack of real virtues. Bill sleeps with women he isn't married to and he even goes to nightclubs where the dancers are "halb-nakt" but he doesn't have a dirty mind: Father turns the television set off the minute any hint of body-beauty comes on and tears pages with bathing suit advertisements out of magazines, but he does have a dirty mind.

You want to like me and be proud of me and respect me, but you think you can't if you suspect that I have been 'sleeping around' so you pretend to yourself that I slept with Rasheed because I was tempted beyond endurance and that I have probably repented and won't do it again. Nonsense - I haven't repented and will do it again. I slept with Rasheed because I liked him and was attracted to him and trusted him not to think any less either of himself or of me for it. He is a sensuous person, as you know, and he has an extremely healthy West Indian attitude toward sex which does not allow a sense of guilt to spoil his feeling that his loneliness is transcended. Nor does Rasheed 'take advantage' of women; he is considerate and competent, and I'm still pleased that he was my first. What I mean to say is that your dirty-mindedness is not that you 'wonder,' but that you hope so desperately that it isn't so.

While we are on the topic I'll answer a question that I dodged before - you ask how important Greg is to me. I knew it would require a long answer so I've waited until now.

He's very important: I like him well enough to think, sometimes, that if circumstances don't change I might even marry him eventually. We understand each other, we're comfortable and spontaneous with each other, he is mature in areas where I'm immature and he's immature in areas where I am mature, he is a potentially excellent husband because he is so considerate and so warm; he is an excellent lover and our physical relationship is a very joyful one. Do you know what I'm talking about? Do you know what it is like to make love affectionately and freely with someone who is emotionally and intellectually tuned to you, whose body you like and who likes your body, who is concerned that you should be as pleased as he is? And afterwards to lie with your arms around each other feeling so close and so happy that you almost burst? I'm not sure you do know, and if not, forgive me if this hurts you. But you must see that this is good for me (as it is good for Greg) and does not fragment me - I have not lost anything, not my integrity or my joy, and I have been gaining. I no longer have the fear that I'll be emotionally paralyzed as Father has always seemed to be. And I think that what I've said is true for Judy too. So when you wonder, please don't hope that it is not so, just that both I and whoever else is involved are mature enough to make our physical loving mutually generous.

If you want practical reassurance - I have a doctor's prescription for birth control pills. If you want practical justification, remember the problems of marrying too young and too early.

I wonder if you have found this cruel. I hope not. Don't you see what will happen if we begin to write you comforting letters rather than honest ones? Whenever we see you and whenever we come home we would have to think "I wonder if they suspect, I wonder if they wonder" and our relationship would be based on suspicion and dishonesty. Do you want us to have nothing to say to you because some of the vital areas of our lives are things you can't bear to hear about? If so tell us, and we'll write you comforting lies but we won't respect you and we'll dislike ourselves. This is important! Unless we can be honest with you and unless you want us to be honest with you, you and we will lose what is most important to us. [2012]

I hope you're not hurt.

Much of this letter seems to have been said before - do you understand and disagree? Do you not understand and disagree? Are you unsure which?

March 7

My room is prettier and prettier - Greg will take some pictures to show you. There are new things since yesterday: a print from Greg, blue and orange and other colors, by Paul Klee (called "Sinbad the Sailor"); a book of pictures by Marc Chagall, with a radiant green-red-blue cover, from Don and Olivia; and a large, stunning book of my beloved Dürer, letters and paintings. From Judy I got some rather stunning leopard-looking underwear; from Gma K $2.00; from Maria and Tooz' and Anne, cards and letters; and from you, two very beautiful crystal glasses - I was excited at having five dollars to spend as a present, and determined to get something beautiful - not practical. So on Saturday, when it was Just-spring, mud luscious and puddle-wonderful with rafts of thin clouds moving very quickly, I went downtown to Domus and wandered through the really beautiful things full of the knowledge of having money to spend on anything. And got the glasses, very delicate and perfectly formed. I'll like them for a long time.

The beginning of March 6 found me full of coffee, nervous, typing erratically - 7 a.m., 9 a.m., found me still typing, and my first present was the completion of an extremely complex philosophy paper which had been due long ago.

Greg decided to make the birthday dinner, since I'd made his, and Olivia had made Don's (24th) last week. So we had: a candle, gigantic, rare steaks, mushrooms, fat black olives, brown bread and butter, salad, port, and peanuts. Then I opened my presents and we took pictures and were gay in spite of the fact that Don has just missed getting into Oxford and thinks he's a failure!

He and She-Olivia intend to be married in summer and Olivia has asked whether I'll be bridesmaid - I might. G may be best man - just to keep the whole thing in the family. G is going to summer school and working on his thesis: both he and Olivia graduate this year, and Don will have his MA in September.

It is strange to be twenty two; I've always thought of it as the year a woman's age begins to show. How old was I when you turned 22, Mother? Nearly a year? You'll really have to start to think of me as grown up.

Later:

It is wet and sunny, nearing the Ides of March.

Olivia is to be married on June 10: she wants me to stay to be maid of honor, so I'll probably work for John Neufeld at cherry-picking or something between the end of exams at May 6 and the wedding, and then come home. Registrar Jean Royce tells me that she may be able to get me a bursary for books. Don will probably go to Essex near London for his PhD and Olivia wants to go with him, leaving in September when Don finishes his thesis.

[journal]

March 10

"Il faut aimer, n'importe qui, n'importe quoi, n'importe comment, pourvu qu'on aime." Mme Aubray, Les idées de. 1890

Ironical comment - I write it down, ironically with a view to the superiority of knowing when, who, not to love (c/f D and O), but if fallacy - a fallacy I've tried partially to live by. Whether ironically or whether seriously moral - a statement of conflict.

March 11

Another one of my resolution dreams: I saw Jean-Jacques tying tarps onto a truck, four girls getting onto the back of the truck, and the truck moving away. I was in the cab beside him, he was angry about a letter he had received from me; but we talked. He was defensive and hostile, I was conciliatory. Finally we were lying down and he had begun to understand. I put my hand on his chest and said "I still like you very much but I can't be a little in love with you as I was, because you've treated me too badly. I have to look after my pride." And some time later he pulled me over and kissed me with his large soft mouth - I reminded him of the subway, rode back to Place de l'Opéra when we had stood beside the pole and he had kissed me so that I thought I would explode. The resolution wasn't a joyful reunion, just a kind of tenderness restored - as it had been in Athens, I suppose, when I was sick and he bought me the Dürer book as soon as his money came. (I wonder if he has really forgotten?) He's confused in my mind with Rasheed; perhaps that is why I was so irrationally and confusedly attracted to him; this dream was like the dream in which I explained to myself why Mitchell had withdrawn, in which we ran through a garden in the moonlight looking for a place to make love in, but pursued.

That room I had in Rome - the dark and stench of the hall, my door beside a table piled with junk, the cold stone floor, the bed that was always cold until Jerry stole a blanket for me from the Naples hostel, the table with its lace scarf, my Botticelli book open to the three graces, my Italian text in the drawer, my yellow-covered journal, a glass with roses dropped from a funeral procession, carnations stolen from the electric virgin, or flowering white twigs from the Campidoglio, or daffodils from the public gardens along the middle of the street paralleling the Foro Romano. The tiny window set into the thick wall, barred, looking out on the hall. The dim mirror above the washstand, the fought-over lampidina hanging from a long cord from the ceiling, my rough paper packages full of prunes or olives or carrots from the market - wonderful, large, sticky, black, sour prunes from the cat-sour market in the park.

My room in Athens, large windows on the hallway, one low cot in the corner, the small table with journal and Botticelli, the folding wooden camp chair, nightgown on a nail behind the door. Jean-Jacques' bedroll spread randomly on the floor under the window - the grimy white shirt over the back of the chair, the neighbour's chanting prayers night and morning, the dim early morning cry of the rag woman, the street outside already brilliant with sun when we emerged from the dark stairway at 8 o'clock to buy bread and butter, arm-over-shoulder, happy.

Beckett on Proust: "Habit is a compromise effected between the individual and his environment. It is a generic term for the countless treaties concluded between the countless subjects that constitute the individuals and their correlative objects. The periods of transition that separate consequentive adaptations represent the perilous zones in life of the individual, dangerous, painful, mysterious and fertile, when for a moment the boredom of living is replaced by the suffering of being."

March 18

Saturday morning, woke in the sleeping bag with sunlight on all the white walls, the red and blue light concentrated in bars on the side of the bed, Greg tramping in to wake me. We made bran muffins and I scrubbed the kitchen while they baked. Then we took all twelve of them upstairs on a plate, ate them with thick slices of butter, sitting in the sun. Then he kissed the side of my neck (and we moved the three muffins left to my desk) and lay watching clouds through the top half of the window (who could have dreamed that my room could be so beautiful, last October when it was covered with pink wallpaper?) He was extremely happy - I was too.

Tonight he burst in for a moment, poised on the rubber mat looking very powerful, terribly happy; I think I want to keep him!

[letter]

18 March

It's good to have Greg writing to you so that I can stop explaining and let him try: maybe he sounds less arrogant. My first reaction to your letter was despair: I thought - well, that particular communication has been lost, no hope for any understanding there. And my feelings were hurt. And I felt wretched because you seemed to have given up on me - with more bitterness than you ever show - as a fraud and a hypocrite. My consequent reaction - which you'll recognize as one of Father's - was: if she doesn't approve of me and won't agree with me it is obvious that the relationship has reached the end of its value! And so on: "I won't go home; I'll be like Uncle Walter and do what I like without telling anyone anything. It's obvious that by telling anyone anything you just hurt them and estrange them. Uncle W has the right idea: I thought she was different but it's obvious that she doesn't want me to be anything but what she approves of: so let's feed her as few lies as possible but as many as necessary and she'll be happy" and so on in this vein.

Olivia immediately pointed out that this was silly: also that my very bitter reaction had nothing to do with whether or not you understand, as you said you do. I had expected that if I explained, you would not only understand but approve. The fact that you violently did not approve seemed to prove that any value I have for you is false, since what I approve in myself is what you disapprove. 'Loving' me under those conditions is meaningless: if I'm not valued for what I am, it's not me that is valued, but something imagined. This was what your letter suggested: and not only that I had let you down, but my whole generation.

Olivia also pointed out that to ask you to approve is to ask too much, because in order to approve you would have to give up some of the beliefs most important in making life or events meaningful to you. It's true - you have a hard enough time as it is and I can't expect you to give up your beliefs.

We're stale-mated. You won't change your beliefs and I won't change mine, much as we may 'understand.' We'll have to see whether there's still a foundation for a relationship in any case - I'll be home for part of the summer and we'll see. I'm afraid! It surprised me how lost I felt even now at the thought of such a breakdown of communications, even tho 'home' hasn't been home for a very long time.

I've begun to understand from your letter that you were hurt as well as furious as a result of my previous letter. If I sounded superior about my sexual experience it was partly that I thought I did know something you didn't - I'd never seen anything in your relationship with Father that I could connect with my own experience. (And how was I to know it was good?) I quite naively thought you'd be glad I'd discovered something better.

You misunderstood my use of the phrase "a good lover" - any old stick certainly cannot be a good lover, I'm not talking about technicalities. Any old stick cannot be generous, or warm, or funny, or understanding.

This letter of Greg's is quite good. He has expressed my feelings about commitment very well too.

This is a funny philosophy class I'm having: Mr Estall in Theory of Knowledge is slow-spoken, friendly, wise but in no hurry to show it, funny - he stands or wanders about the front of the room fixating us with his blue eyes from under his long white eyebrows telling stories to make his point. The fans are humming and blowing, sun comes onto the floor in scattered patterns, 1:30 of Friday afternoon, no one is paying optimum attention, exams are little more than a month away, and we are talking about whether or not minds exist.

What time of the month was Rasheed's birthday? I saw him two nights ago; he's happy. This sort of weather makes me think of him.

[journal]

March 19

Woke from a dream - Frank had sent me a box of papers, among them I found the manuscript of a short story with pictures of him as he grew up and pictures of myself looking vain, young, and pretty. The story had been published in a magazine, with different pictures. I read it in the magazine version - a rough, discontinuous stream-of-consciousness story which I don't remember. I remember only that it evoked a particularly sharp sense of life moving too fast to watch that Frank lives with more than anyone. I woke up, bathed, made biscuits, all with the lemon-taste of the dream in my mouth. (Life moving too fast to realize, but surely it is lovely and terrible as it passes.) The personal symbol I remember is the summer of fifteen when, every time I ran by the dirty window of the garage, I could see my face brown and altered in a blur of green leaves; image located dimly behind a film of dust, but glowing as tho' it were a dream and not a reflection. I think the window a prism that caught my face and concentrated it into a statement of that flying time: as an image it says everything.

March 24

I don't often face this leg: thick at the thigh, bony at the knee, tibia and fibula and little more at the calf, heel jutting out like the end of a bone, a long scar on the ankle, other scars all around the ankle like a starry bangle, pale pink, bone jutting out at the instep, toes crushed together, thick grey calloused skin on the heel cracked and dirty. Then there is the other too: thick at the thigh, large as a leg of lamb at the calf, gross and wide at the foot; but it is strong. (Once I was complaining to Mother about my legs, and she said evasively, "Men are really more interested in the ankles than in legs," and I thought "Oh, perhaps I will have good ankles at least, when I grow up.")

The thin one (small boys' giggles behind me on the street, "One fat one and one skinny one") lags behind me: there is an odd jerk when I bring it forward in walking, because it doesn't flex at the instep to transfer my weight.

I wear green stockings, yellow ones, silvery blue ones that glitter: one fat leg and one thin one, grotesque but defiant. I will not camouflage - this much at least I can afford to offer small boys on the street and young men with raised eyebrows, they can peer as they like.

Even if I were beautiful I would be ugly. Even if I had the face and body of the Black Russian [if I had] the legs of mine I would be set apart: there would be a difference in the eyes of young men. Even Greg: it makes me wild to wonder why he stays and wants me. (When he said at the movie tonight, that he thought a dark-haired girl across the aisle was beautiful, and an angel-blonde with my hatchet-faced boy, I withered up, not because I'm afraid he will give me up, but in a way because I despise him for not giving me up: for not giving me the slightest feeling that he would give me up to try to get something beautiful - for liking me too easily and too soon and too comfortably.)

Besides, I want Don. On to that again?

I've already forgotten the leg, or sat on it. Its circulation is bad and it gets cold easily.

But this neurotic need to be beautiful - I claim it's metaphysical: a need to incorporate in myself my only value. But I say to myself that I'm glad for my leg - it sets me apart, it forces me to be distinctly myself-with-the-thin-leg-and-the-fat-leg.

A lie - if I could look like the Beauty in a moment, I would: hair, mouth, neck, breasts, bottom, white thighs and fine firm calves and small feet in their narrow slippers. I would change!

Fantasies from very young childhood, of being beautiful and perfect, the long search in the mirror as I turned my face and turned it hoping to find that when I turned it full face forward it would be new and flawless.

The long love-affair with Janeen's face: stricken desire at the other faces I have passed, sad confrontations with myself, love affair with the Russian's entire body this year: no academic interest. Lust. I want to be - to have in my mirror this face and that body.

Agony at the age of twelve and thirteen, and mostly since, because my body is short and thick, my shoulders wide as a man's, my face in photographs always fleshy and peasant. The lifelong desire to lose weight, self-loathing and nausea, the lifelong ghost of ugliness under the skin, much worse than any sin - a guilt of being. (What right to live if you're ugly? And all the rest of you too, the crowds of you coming through doors, you've no right to exist.)

Called Greg and he was sympathetic. But he said "You must keep this thing because it is useful to you." "It isn't a question of keeping it, you can't take it off. You forget that it's there until somebody reminds you." ("Who reminds you?" "Anybody can: somebody walking behind you on the street, a kid ten years old. A difference in degree in people's faces when they look at you." "Yeah I know.") "It isn't that it functions, the point is that it doesn't function, or it functions very badly, it has no circulation and it is always cold." I hung up because I was crying in front of a stranger or something who's just come in the door.

[letter]

March 24

Now they are only three weeks away. This morning I made bran muffins in remembrance of yours, Mother. Sun all day, crowds of people in the streets, smell of flowers from the market square, and an Easter egg. There was a card from the Grandparents Epp which enclosed a dollar and said "Read Psalm 1 and be happy" - I was. The snow is gone and a few yellowish stubs of tulip buds have begun to show in the mud under last fall's grey leaves.

We are anxious about getting essays and lab reports done so that we can begin to study. First exam on April 18, last on May 6. Two more essays and a report for an original experiment in psychology. Don and Olivia nervous about getting married, Greg chaffing because he wants to be skiing and has to write papers instead; feelings of affection toward professors who only have four classes more to teach, feelings of hostility to that idiot Dr Weisman who can't make himself clear; outline of what now is like. (Last year this was Greece and Ischia!)

News is slow traveling across all those three thousand miles of muddy brush and prairie between me and you. Echoes hardly reach anymore. Good thing summer is almost here.

I was telling Greg about the trip to Mexico and Arizona. We were back in La Glace by this time that year weren't we?

What I also remember is coming home from the sawmill one year just before spring breakup, and stopping at Kinderwater's on the way, and having some Grüben (I think) for breakfast.

Also, all those springs of watching for Kinderwaters' car at the highway, glamorous excitement of going by a house with people in it who had just come from California and might have brought us something. (How are the Kinderwaters?) They'll be an extremely vivid childhood memory: the funny smell in their porch and the funny Catholic calendars on the wall, and the terribly enticing upstairs that we were never allowed to see. Magazines! A Billy-Goat-Gruff wooden bridge cross the ravine, Mr Kinderwater's pipe smell and his friendly gruffness. All in all they were very glamorous people, so different from the people we usually visited (who were glamorous too, in a way).

Happy spring - ie, read Psalm 1 and be happy.

[undated letter]

So - my frustration and bitterness. Of course there was some truth in my tragic hero illusion as well - I may come to understand this again when I'm less threatened by his and your rejection of my values: my life, is what it comes to.

Your letter, Mother: it made me so sad the first reading. I do everything wrong for you! Of course I shouldn't disparage your life and I don't mean to disparage what you make of it. I'm so blind to things that I take for granted you must want what I want and that you must have as much trouble liking what you have as I would if I were in your place. This is nonsense of course: I'll begin to realize that the sort of life you want or need is not at all what I want and need and that therefore what you have is not so bad for you as it would be for me. Olivia agrees with you that I tend to expect other people to want what I want and that I try to reform them if they don't.

All right - you aren't a heroine after all, since you really enjoy your life as much as I do mine, especially now that it is changed. But you know, part of the reason I have felt as I do about your life is that for a fairly long time now I've felt as tho' you really did want to have part of my life to fill in what yours lacked. And I'm jealous of my life: I want it all for myself, because as long as you need it I can't be happy about doing with it what I want. So I'm glad you're going to school: you're on your own and I can have my life back. This is how I feel it, anyway.

And last year [month?] when I wrote the letter that hurt you about sex, the same thing caused us trouble. You'd never told me it was good, and I inferred from what I heard through the walls that it was terrible, and so I assumed you'd be happy to know that I'd discovered it didn't have to be terrible! Again, I thought I knew what you lacked or felt when I didn't at all.

Anyway, I'll try not to do any more crusading and bungling and take what you say at face value, and expect you to look after yourself, and not worry. If you accept the terms and reciprocate - we have a deal.

About the other deal, money: Miss Royce called me this morning to tell me that I've been awarded a General Motors Scholarship for the coming year - as much money as I need up to $2000. I won't ask for that much, but I'll be able to send you $200. Greg insists that he wants to send you some money too: ie lend it to me to send to you; he's determined, so if you could use $250 instead of $200 let us know. Also, when do you need it? He doesn't get his fellowship and I don't get my scholarship until registration at least (the 13th of Sept) (and his is later): can you delay paying your fees? Do you have clothes, shoes? Do you have money for books?

Will you have time to knit my pullover? I've bought a knitting book with instructions in it for a sweater I like a lot: I'll put it into a package with some wool, the other white pullover, and that sweater suit of Victoria's (it's too 'mature' for me), and send it this week if I can.

The General Motors Scholarship came as a huge surprise and at exactly the right moment: because, even with the philosophy scholarship and the $1000 loan, the year was really quite bleak-looking and pinched-in-the-cheeks. But now I'm completely without worries and have $1000 less debt to worry about. Also the scholarship is very prestigious and will look good on graduate school application forms. Ordinarily the award is made only in first year and continues through for the four years, but someone decided to graduate after three years and I was recommended to get the year left over, on the basis of last year's marks I suppose. I'm elated! Greg's elated! (He had visions of having to subsidize me with crumbs from HIS table!) Freedom from worry and some new clothes too -

You'll be interested to hear about Rasheed - he and Basil came to see me today to invite me to a party they're having tonight.

[undated letter]

Your ability to write the kind of letter your last one was is one of the most wonderful things about you. And I'm glad you decided not to shield another of your difficult Epps - as you say, I'm lucky to have friends who can head off the unfortunate Epp reaction to hurt feelings at least partially. You are right in saying that I tend not to take other people's opinions seriously when I'm convinced of something - but my feeling is often like the feeling of helplessness during Rasheed and my arguments with Uncle Bill Epp - there isn't a possibility of coming to an agreement because the two opposing viewpoints start with two irreconcilable premises and two incompatible sets of values: so the opposing viewpoint is automatically discounted because it just does not and cannot fit into the whole structure of beliefs - you have the same problem altho' in a way you have one-and-a-half feet in one world and half-a-foot in another.

You know I've always thought of you as having a kind of vicarious life 'outside' thru' me - and my former long detailed letters were one way of giving you some of my life to make up for your isolation: this makes it doubly difficult for you to accept me doing something that you can't approve of and thus share. And this leaves me in a position of being responsible for cutting you off from one of your sources of gratification - but things are different now, you're going to school, if you are determined to, you'll go to university and then to different countries. You'll have a wider life of your own and won't need ours so much: this is the best thing that could happen to you. The need for security from your children that you speak about can be turned into a very welcome freedom from them in order to do what you want and find yourselves after these many years of responsibility for other smaller creatures so intent on finding themselves that they pay you no consideration.

I don't think it is true that we didn't get what we wanted from you: you never stopped giving, and you know how central you were to our lives. I supposed that you keep saying 'we' when you deprecate our family background out of loyalty to Father - but surely you don't think you could have done any more? If you didn't give us a 'home' in the normal sense of the word it was partly from economic factors that you couldn't help, partly because Father has a personality that isn't sure enough of itself and its values, and partly because the children in the home are a queer lot.

A. The eldest is isolated by a deformity (which you couldn't help) and compensates for it by 1. developing her intelligence 2. rejecting all other people who might see her as an imperfect object rather than the live and oversensitive somebody. So you did what you could to help her develop confidence enough in at least some other people and made her feel valuable for herself (it's true: you've no idea how important you've been in giving me the amount of self confidence that I have - and that is why the thought of you withdrawing your approval is so threatening).

B. The second is haunted by a domineering older sibling and grows up to feel that she has no importance in herself, so must react in order to become somebody separate and just as good (so you did what you could to show her she was a somebody too: moreover you protected her from the sibling).

C. The eldest son has some especial problems accepting criticism (felt to be unfair) from a father he does not respect (so you try to arbitrate between them). He is full of resentment at all sorts of ills in the world (so you show him that everybody in the world is not against him, you listen to him, you tell him all the things he wants to hear but won't admit to wanting).

D. A youngest who spent his first 6 years being browbeaten by the three other browbeater siblings and therefore must be built up again completely - which you do: with the result that he is (seems) 300% happier now than he was then.

So don't you ever understand that you were the family and the home? Of course we had warmth - and nearly constantly. I hope you have a chance to stop spending all your energy on other people and can spend it on finding out what you would really like to do for the next years. (Mrs Morrison says that a woman's life is discontinuous: it changes completely during its different stages.)

There is always this problem of hurting people: which people must you choose to hurt? The whole question is complicated in the differences in the people themselves. (For instance, I could do one thing which would hurt part of my friends, ruin myself, but make the rest of the relatives happy. On the other hand, I can do one thing which makes me happy, makes some of my friends unhappy, makes some of them happy, and hurts or shocks a whole lot of relatives, etc. Solution? Die - everybody can be equally unhappy, then, but not for long!)

There has to be a choice you know, and I think I've made it. So the people that will be hurt in this situation are

1. grandparents (who needn't know very much), who would not accept Greg, married or unmarried - the sort of life they'd approve for me would make me desperately unhappy; and I have longer to live than they have; they have their own lives and have no right to mine: so I can love them, be interested in them, write them, visit them (not too often and not too long at one time) and that is all. What other relationship can there be in any case?

2. aunts and uncles (Anne and Harvey are the only ones I want to keep any contact with) - I don't need them and they don't need me. Laissez-faire.

3. neighbours - fortunately I'm 3,000 miles away from them - and I think I have learned the lesson about not embarrassing you with them. No more boy visitors - neighbours' opinions are more important. (Although it makes me furious to think that inconsequential people must be given such importance because community and reputation is so important). (But okay, when I'm at home I'll play by their rules - when I'm here I play by mine, not theirs. There are limits!) Do you really feel that you must be evasive with them because of me?

As for calling somebody your son for yourself and for him, that you can do whenever you like. It concerns nobody but you and him. (Some people are important and some are not! And the ones who are not important and so aren't taken into consideration are usually more scandalized than hurt.)

Do you identify yourself with Grandpa and Grandma Epp? You aren't like them - and you can't really say that your reaction to Greg is like theirs to Rosemarie.

And if two people can live together without being married why can't their parents adopt them in the same way? (Unlegalized inlawship.)

Your view that a marriage is built on commitment has some truth too! It is true that if two people are married for good they are likely to try harder to make their marriage work, but is the effort worth it? To spend your life struggling nobly to make a marriage hold together, sometimes with very minimal results, is a nice ideal abut it is a huge waste of time if there is a possibility that both partners will be happier with somebody else. The only time so much pain and sacrifice is worthwhile is either when 1. there is no better solution or 2. the results are really superior to marriages of more compatible people. You can't tell me that some marriages aren't better off dissolved! No matter how much self sacrifice or effort goes into them. Perhaps if you believe in another life you can justify wasting this one: but if you believe as I do that there isn't another chance at life, this one isn't expendable - there's no excuse for throwing it away.

Trust and love can't be blind - they have to come gradually, not before but after a long experience together. Investment is made in downpayments a little at a time, and marriage is untenable until there's a good nest egg. What if you're married and the down payments stop? Don't tell me they don't, often enough.

If is often true that you can't become strong unless you are forced into difficult situations and cannot run away, it is just as often true that people are stunted and killed because they do not run away from difficult situations. (What about Mrs Voth?) It's a common happening. How do you know what will force growth and what will kill?

I've often thought about whether you'd be disappointed at our not having traditional weddings - do you realize how much money you'd save? How much worry about invitations etc? How much work for people with other things to do? Can you imagine Father paying for it? Can you imagine us being able to pay for it?

You are right, tho', it should be a joyous occasion. And my idea of joyous is not a traditional wedding to which you have to invite all the people that mean nothing to you, have to say a series of things that mean less, have to go thru' an act which distresses you. There must be some special way, really special way, to be married (if at all) that doesn't include all this. I don't like the idea of a Justice of the Peace either; getting married is a pretty sordid business any way you do it unless you can make it up to a certain extent for yourself.

I can't promise you you'll be there because I hope to be in England for the next three or five years and perhaps out of Canada for good.

And besides, it isn't likely ever to take place - I don't think marriage is compatible with the way of life I need. But whatever, don't become a Grandma Epp and worry and worry.

[undated letter]

Paul is more like me than like you and more like Father than like you, and all of us are about as opposite from you as it is possible to be.

David's problem is more common than it would be if it were only a form of mental disturbance. 'Alienated' youth are everywhere, and if they're bright they're like Paul. The difficulty is that 'alienation' isn't a disturbance, it is the healthiest, sanest, only response possible to a set of circumstances.

Put yourself in Paul's place: if you were realizing that you were you and could only be yourself once; if you sometimes believe you can become somebody wonderful and extraordinary; if you feel and can't express what you feel like to other people who also feel it (understanding isn't enough); and if other people don't recognize you or your potential or your worthwhileness or your feeling, you have a conflict between wanting to be approved of and wanting to be recognized. The two can't be the same when the only people who are around to approve of you are not able to recognize you because you are fundamentally different from them. So in this case self-realization and need for approval and love aren't compatible. The idea is to get into an environment where the two are compatible. Also to find some kind of work which you can do without feeling humiliated by selling yourself short. I don't know how but I think Paul will be able to do this. I was and am like him: I still sometimes hate to be touched, and I think it is because being touched without being recognized is a little of what you need, hated because it is not enough. Pride and disappointment make you fight it off; it's like saying "I need something like this, but not this. And I won't compromise." Anger.

The feeling of being a nothing is something I haven't had (I think partly because of the leg, which gave me a strong tho' sometimes negative identity) but Greg has it to some extent. I can't explain it. I think it's partly a matter of not having the 'proper' emotional responses that are expected of you because you don't have the values that are normal to those around you. Also perhaps an inability to identify strongly with some adult you'd like to be like because you don't know any who qualify.

Our problems are very different from what yours were, I think: everything in the world has an impact, which reached your Mennonite youth much less I think. We aren't Mennonites any more; we aren't Christians either; and if you're about to say that it would be a good thing for us all if we were, you're right. In fact it would solve the whole problem of 'alienation' and values, but it doesn't seem possible to believe that way now, and it's no good unless you believe it completely.

It's frightening to think that all the David's and Paul have a desperate sense of their own responsibility for becoming something good. Not medium good, but great and important. How are we ever going to help them be that? Adjustment won't do; it's resignation. I'm sending the Hemingway book because it struck me as an example of how to keep on wanting that without being paralyzed by how life treats you. Hemingway committed suicide at the age of 62 when he was sick and could no longer write. Sometimes I think he was right to. You probably won't like the book, but it's for Paul, who will.

This has been a tirade again, with no good advice and no comfort. Mainly I mean to say that you shouldn't feel responsible and that you shouldn't worry too much. I'm glad you told me about it; I'm looking forward to seeing you and him and Rudy who doesn't seem too threatened by it all yet.

[journal]

April 3

Cowley's [philosophy prof] party: his house with the wood staircase and fireplace, small sitting room full of chairs all except two occupied by other members of the 334 class. Olivia and I on hard chairs at the end of the room. Cowley himself, among his books and prints of Renoir, no ornament other than those, grey sleeveless sweater, baggy grey pants covering an amorphous body looking always terribly clothed. Olivia in her blue dress showing a lot of thigh above the tops of her stockings, legs looking pretty, gay and confident because Jim Beal is "in love with" her; exaggerating her own flightiness, fuzziness, childlikeness, embarrassingly but with full aplomb, arrogance, charm. Don in the wicker chair with one bluejeaned leg crossed over the other, held horizontally level with the back of the chair, at easy terms with the Other, confident in his own triangular face, his bushing red hair, his exact proportions, and his Greek eyes. No en-soi / pour-soi trouble like mine.

That again: when Olivia is delightful, I feel drab; when Don is delightful Greg is sincerely, kindly, drab. He is sad that I am sad, because his approval is not enough, or anything; he is distressed and holds his head stubbornly against my chest, nestling like a very small boy: hopelessness of an alliance of fellow creatures, the shadow-doubt of compromise. Perhaps he, perhaps I; sick doubt. Sick love? Jealousy, competition. The watching again of interaction, Don, next to him Olivia. Cowley in the rocking chair going into fits of hoarse laughter at his own carefully well-told stories. (Rather wonderful bizarre and abandoned laugh in a good grey philosopher.) Greg bent forward, hunched in leather jacket and large white pants and very large boots, sincere and bent on understanding Sartre (who says that you can be what you want to be), full of good will. Do you omit to love someone because you do not respect their good opinion of you?

He stood at the screen door about to go home, I was lying in bed; and we looked at one another. I wanted to say, "I love you a little" but I wasn't sure.

[journal]

April 10

We went to the Academy Awards in Nellie's kitchen, Greg on one side of the couch, Olivia on the chair jumping up and down with her cigarette smoke lifting in layers through the blue light from the television screen. Bob Hope made bitter, bitter jokes; there were some memorable people (Julie Christie in a miniskirt; the marvelous mouth shaped like Janeen's moving, moving as though it were exactly point-for-point connected to a moving mind). Hope's final speech was about "Men have a need for laughter, they have a need for beauty," movies show man's life of emotion.

My own feeling about movies is like this: they concentrate whatever is visually meaningful in life to create an atmosphere of metaphysical meaningfulness. I used to believe that visual meaning, shape, color, inscape, was enough; and it is only as I lose my sense of this that I need metaphysical meaning.

Human relationships still appall me, appall me, appall me. My reticence - their silliness. My boredom: their unidimensionality. His, Greg's. Olivia's sometimes. My guilt; their judgment. Their sincerity: my reticence. Their sincerity: my distrust. Their sincerity: my fury, my boredom. Their goodness: my disgust. Their disgust: my disgust. Their gaiety: my jealousy. My competence: their jealousy. Their competence: my jealousy. Their dispute: my derision. Their rapport: my envy.

In confrontation with them I must have my joy - is it true that in confrontation with them I lose it? I'm restless; there are no miracles, I see no miracles, I make no miracles. Greg bores me because my joy no longer takes us both off. He tires me, he wearies me, he's solicitous and worried, I don't like to kiss him and I don't want to touch him. I wonder whether I'd want to introduce him to anybody as my boyfriend. I think with horror of what Mother will say and feel when we break up. I dislike his frightened way of holding his shoulders and his jerky gestures. I don't like his long-nosed profile or the fat under his chin. (But his face, sometimes, and his bare legs.)

I've told him he's boring, I've compared the reaction of Don and Olivia with our non-reaction and then gone to sleep with my back to him. The silly Oscar presenters always came in holding hands with each other.

My stomach is constantly a little acid, there's a little soreness in the back of my throat, the hard silly faces of aging actresses, flesh moving, shifting eddying all the time toward even more ugliness before there has been time to be wisely young or really beautiful. Frank's bitter horrifying letter on an April Saturday night.

Don stood straight and livid in the hallway and complained that we had not walked her the last block home: a man in a car stopped and followed her, it seems. Greg was conciliatory, I was furiously angry because of his protective attitude, frustrated at the whole system of female timidity it condones; threatened by a sort of femininity I haven't got and really despise. And yet the small bones, the long hair, the orgasms, the scent of shampoo.

Greg likes me.

[undated letter]

The wind this sunny morning blew in a notice of library fines and a long envelope from Toronto which contained a very large painting from Maria with a letter from Anne on the back which says: "Here is a rainbow picture to cheer you up in the exam cram period. There is a house under the rainbow for you, courtesy of Maria. Also a request to come see us whenever you can. Do come for a time after your exams before you go home."

My latest idea is to bop down to Toronto for part of the time before Olivia's wedding - if it ever comes off, that wedding, since there are constant fights and reconciliations and scenes in which they throw their breakfast at one another (the stairs this morning were covered with cheese omelette) and shout insults. Whether or not the wedding actually takes place will, I suppose, depend on the dominant mood June 10 morning.

I telephoned Judy on Sunday, just to talk, and she sounded calm enough altho' she begins to write exams tomorrow. I'm really glad to have a chance to see her this summer: she and Joanne want to take our Petercat to live with them in Toronto if they get jobs. Then I can have him back in fall.

In three weeks approximately, May 6, 5 p.m., all of this will be over. In the meantime you probably won't be getting any more letters than the average one measly per month from all winter.

Thank you for the paska - Olivia and I enjoyed it so there was none left for the boys.

[undated letter]

The gooseberry bush at the psychiatry department came out in leaves this morning - not leaves, suggestions of leaves - as Olivia and I went off to write a philosophy exam in my best course this year: first exam. At last the depression of being two months before the exams is gone (two weeks before, two days before), from now on it is eat, study, sleep, study, write in a solid succession that makes time disappear reliably day by day until finally on May 6 at 5 p.m. I come out of the tunnel and it's nearly summer. The worst part is the two weeks before, when you can't work but you feel guilty continuously; depression, bad temper, black gloom, hatred particularly of your best friends - then there was (as happens!) a money problem, solved as usual by my Guardian Registrar who inveigled a bursary for me for this summer: as it happens, not only can I buy books for summer courses, but I can have two, perhaps even three, summer dresses. One of them I've already made, another I've bought fabric for: brilliant colors - now is the winter of our discontent made glorious summer is what they mean.

And I've acquired a new importance thru' the two little new bottles on my spice shelf - one of vitamin C pills, the other of antibiotic, both because a colony of staphilococci have settled just behind my tonsils.

Anyway, the first exam is over, the next the day after tomorrow, and this afternoon I'm lying under a hairdryer reading Papa Hemingway feeling alive and looking at the swatch of purple-orange-red-Joseph's-coat fabric that is going to be made into a culotte dress. Olivia has three exams in a row: Greg wrote one yesterday and one this aft' and has now gone off to his professor's house to watch the hockey game: it seems they've become buddies and want to run (training) early in the mornings. Mr and Mrs Morrison are going to Europe in less than a month, since Mr M is a delegate to a peace conference in Geneva and Jean is going to have a holiday (she's working part time, but full time 8 hours a day, and clears in a week what Olivia and I live on for months). Meanwhile Greg gets the other (small) car to take me and Petercat to Toronto after exams. It won't hold any more.

Funny you should remember Henrietta Spaniel - I feel rather affectionate for her now: she certainly served a useful function in the days when we were more awkward than now, conscious of being countrified and not pretty very often, too big or too peculiar or too asymmetrical and far from gorgeous - she was the good, silly, scapegoat so much worse than us that we looked good in comparison (at least we were not so dense).

So Frank must have been married yesterday.

April 25

Branches are red at the tips, bleached white toward the trunk, full of birds, full of wind, full of rain and lightning at night because this spring we've had an astonishing number of electric storms over the lake, but only at night. Sun. Small blue flowers growing wildly (or wild) on neglected front lawns.

Last Sunday the Howell family including Granny and a silent old Welsh grandfather who is visiting (Richard who spent most of the time trying to trap Petercat in a picnic basket) came from Toronto with a lot of food and wine and a cake to celebrate Olivia's 21st birthday. She got a pile of presents and was wild with excitement. (Come to think of it, have I been home or seen you for a birthday since the 17th?)

I've written two exams and have three more. For the first one I wrote, the Rationalism and Empiricism one, I already (unofficially) know my mark (which includes term marks) - an 89%, which is HIC and which pleases me very much indeed! (But I worked hard on it.) I'm doing better this year in philosophy than in any other subject, strangely enough. It always helps for graduate school. Greg is also doing very well after his many years of not doing very well.

Haven't heard from you for a long time and look anxiously every morning for mail that isn't there.

May 5

The last one is tomorrow, I'm not keen on studying, it's raining on new leaves, tulips, and hyacinths, Greg wrote his last exam this morning, Olivia wrote hers Wednesday, Don as a graduate student has been through for weeks and I'm languishing. The exams have gone quite well after the first one - the English exam yesterday worried me but turned out all right: I think I've picked up a couple of A's.

So at 5 o'clock tomorrow, when I'm through, I'll be throwing Ajax into corners of our apartment, getting ready to move out. We're putting furniture temporarily at the boys' place since they're keeping their place for the summer and Greg will be getting a new roommate there next year, a Frog from Quebec. Sunday morning we'll probably hitch to Ottawa - three hours of fairly attractive countryside - to see the Morrisons and pick up the Triumph in order to take it back to Kingston to pick up Petercat, in order to take him and us to Toronto in order to shop for Olivia's bridesmaid's dresses' patterns and fabrics.

Hadn't I explained about the reading courses? When I changed one of my majors from French to Philosophy after second year, I was two courses short for graduation - I wanted to take six courses instead of five these two last years, but found I couldn't keep up, so am doing two reading courses - in which you read a lot, synthesize your information, but needn't go to any lectures or even see a professor unless you run into problems: an ideal sort of course, the kind I've always wanted - in order to be able to graduate next June. I probably will put a summer between myself and graduate work if I get an award and have enough to live on: I'm aiming for a Commonwealth Scholarship, but they're hard to get.

I'm looking forward very much to seeing the farm. Save one or two seeds for me to plant. I was pleased that Father says I can stay as long as I like - it makes me feel less apprehensive and more welcome.

[journal]

May 29, Toronto, 54 Park Hill Road

Special delivery letter from Don. As I was sitting reading The Return of the Native in a sunny corner of the upstairs sofa, Toozie climbed the stairs to bring me a letter, half covered with stamps and with Don's small pointed handwriting in the address. Five closely written sides apologizing first for his strange hostile behavior to me lately. He's been alternately polite and impersonal, and uncivil. He's seemed to find me a silly woman with opinions not worth air-space. When I left on Friday morning, I paused in the kitchen with my bags full of books, to leave a note for Olivia. He did not look up until I spoke. He wished me a good trip; I didn't answer, uncivil civility! I turned and muttered that he'd be left with peace and quiet at last. As I was nearly down the stairs he called after me again, "Have a good trip." "Yeah," I said. Sweating with the bags in the sun, I though of all the things I should have said: "Do you mean it?"

But it isn't the way I thought, it's better, but it's painful, and I want to kick someone in the teeth - not Don, God, no! I've been pacing; my mind has been pacing; the Brandenburg Concerto takes up the pacing in my mind and carries it along even more quickly. What will I say to him? What will it be like when I see him?

I've known for moments at a time: the night of the ballet when I wore the low-cut orange-and-gold dress, came down the stairs from the balcony toward them and he said only "Ellie!" and then covered his stare with chatter. Olivia led him away and I felt an undercurrent which dismayed me: jealous custody. One night late he couldn't sleep and was reading Time in the kitchen: he looked up with his face open and soft, for once. I could have touched him at some point but I suppose I shouldn't have - and didn't because I was afraid, more than because of loyalties. What if I had? I remember the night [in second year] we had a dinner party and I got drunk out of loneliness for him, necked with Bruce on the floor; later he picked me up from the couch and I remembered long-painfully the sharp smell of his perspiration and the wiry muscle in his thin arm. One night before I left for Europe Olivia unknowingly, as we walked home from Lino's, suggested that he put an arm over my shoulder as well. He did, and I put my hand over his wrist, and we walked home down West Street as he made his Donald Duck noises, three together. Perhaps Olivia did realize, and was demonstrating her power. Perhaps even now she knows; and if so I can understand why my philosophy marks distress her more than they should, perhaps why she has felt threatened by me this year. A frank-discussion period she arranged, if so, was either a test or a demonstration, and dangerous in any case. But we could be trusted, although I overquietly spilled what I felt and he went on about islands.



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