raw forming volume 5 part 1 - 1965 october-november  work & days: a lifetime journal project

Sunday night, October 10, Kennedy Airport, on board

[letter]

The props have just been started and the plane is jerking slightly, pawing at the ground to be gone. There is a subtle 'underground' vibration that is nevertheless very powerful. On the observation deck people are standing waving, with their overcoats flapping in the breeze. They seem, except for the waving hands, to be half-people, because only their legs are lighted. (I wonder why they wave and wave. It seems to be a contact; held as long as possible, like the long breaking away handshake). I'm searching among the legs for Janeen and Gary (who brought me to the airport) but I don't see them. I'm sad because I would like to wave to someone.

The engines have gathered their strength, tautened, sprung into the air, and the lights below look like a garden seeded in even rows.

I'm excited! The lights grow smaller, and those just behind us have been melted down to blurs by the jet blast from the wing engines.

A blond, tousled little boy named Eddie came over to look at the lights from my window when we banked steeply, and now he has been sitting on my lap, eating peanuts gabbling with the little French girl in the seat ahead.

Janeen and Gary came over to Uncle's apartment [on Riverside Drive] early tonight, and we went to the roof to look at the lights: the West River Freeway a snaking line of lights to Washington Bridge - an outline drawing in blue lights. Darkness in Harlem. The irregularly placed squares of light in the high-rise project houses on both sides. ALCOA in reflected red neon letters across the river in New Jersey. A mass of Lower Manhattan skyscraper lights. Strings of road lamps like a visual skeleton for the city. I had gone up and looked at it earlier in the afternoon too, when it was shiny-wet from a rain just heavy enough to send all the Sunday afternoon kite flyers on Grant's Tomb Park indoors.

Then we drove through the heavily lit Fairgrounds and along the conveyor belt highways for miles of dense traffic to the Kennedy Airport. On both sides of the road, for what seems miles, are strangely designed buildings, all floodlit, with names like KLM, BOAC, Air France, Swissair, Alitalia, Iberian blazing in strong whites, reds, and blues. From the general terminal observation deck we saw the blue runway lights in a sea reaching to a white-lit rim miles away, with tall red lights looking like the lights on a ship's masts. Jets moved into their docks with incredible grace. Janeen was as excited as I. (Gary is tall, blond, beginning to grow a beard, blue-eyed, humorous, confident and graceful, warm - and a good driver. I approve.)

Auntie made a special meal for tonight (shredded cabbage, raisins, carrots, broccoli with pork chunks on rice) and we ate it with wine. We had toasts, "proust" to Europe and to Maria's nursery school. The Dyck family is so warm and so ideally loving and funny that they are perfect hosts. Yet I am happy to be going, I need to have an address again and stop being a guest.

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Now we are far over the ocean and will not see land again until Iceland tomorrow morning. Europe tomorrow.

The sky over Kennedy was dusty, from the reflections of many lights. At two in the morning, here, there are dumpling clouds below us and very fine cloud fibres around and above us - a few stars, moon reflected on the wings but not visible. The steady vibration - more vibration than noise - of the four jet prop engines as a background of completely even texture. Unbelievably far below is the ocean - I haven't seen it yet - and more incredibly distant are those stars. Airplanes are mysterious, the gardens of lights on Manhattan are mysterious. And we?

I am always happy when I come back to realizing the mysteriousness of everything that is usually ordinary.

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And looking down this morning is like looking UP on any ordinary day; the cloud formation is reversed!

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We are landing, and I can see the wing flaps moving up or down - a movement of an inch or two inches controls the pelting speed and the enormous weight of this airplane. We are wrapped in fog this morning.

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Iceland was wet and foggy. The airport is a US Naval station (Keflavik) and "no smoking" signs were disappointingly English. I strolled with a Kansas City philosophy major who sits behind me. We could see only Navy barracks and a wasteland airstrip with orange dead grass bent half flat around piles of black boulders. We rose above the fog first: now it is below us, unmoving, looking like treetops in a ghost forest that stretches as far as I can see. Glimpses of rippled water with a toy boat and bluish land in the distance.

Now we have come through a second cloud layer into the sun - but we can't see anything below us. (While we were rising through the ground fog, Paul, I could see the lines of air currents passing over the wings, a slow curve like this [sketch]. This is a jet prop - it has four wing-mounted props and four jet engines. Haven't been able to discover why.)

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A ragged group of stony brown islands appeared under the wings not long ago. The stewardess, in her Icelandic accent, tells me they are the Shetland Islands. I could trace narrow roads, following the edges of a small lake.

Then another country - green - with rivers and cultivated land. Ireland! We may be over England now, but there are clouds below us and I can't see anything.

Meanwhile, I'm having an after-dinner cognac! They also give us red wine in little bottles, meat-and-potato meals with desserts, rolls, juice, and a heap of small paper envelopes containing salt, pepper, sugar, Coffee-mate, butter, chocolate, and a wash cloth! The stewardesses look Scandinavian, are tall, small-boned, curvy, and chic. There are five on this plane, each nearly the exact size and shape of the other. Only faces are different.

Correction - the information says we were over Inverness, Scotland. Ground speed: 390 mph, 630 kmph. Time of arrival at Luxembourg: 1430 hours. Altitude: 17,500'. We'll be over Brussels at 1406 hours.

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I look up from a book, and suddenly, the clouds are gone and as far as I can see are fields and houses, the Continent! Europe! Green and brown fields, irregularly spaced, with clumps of houses held in place by crooked webs of roads. Hills covered with dark green evergreens and many-colored tweeds - fall colors.

We've begun to lose altitude as we cross the border from Belgium into Luxembourg - the sun is shining slantwise over the fields and the glow of the countryside is partly the sun, and partly my enormous excitement. I keep smiling hugely at the stewardess and falling from one side of the airplane to the other in an effort not to miss one village or road or field or stream. They become detailed as we drop toward them. The thrill of seeing the country from high up and then drifting down into it is overwhelming - unreal, mysterious.

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Then the landing in Luxembourg; the first necessity of speaking French to ask for directions to the right bus from the airport. A three-language conversation in the bus, with a Belgian and a Fleming, everyone switching from French to English to German. The Midwest Kansas City boy and I went looking for a hotel when we got into Luxembourg, after changing our puny sums of American money for vast sums of Luxembourger franc notes in pastel colors. Suddenly I had 1477 francs (with no idea of their value) from $29.50 American. Kansas City Jim could speak only English so I was stuck with my French again. "Avez-vous deux chambres très bon marché s'il vous plaît?"

Numéro 15! A tall thin window looking down into a tiny square full of empty wine bottles and looking up at five storeys of shuttered windows and tiny balçons with laundry hanging over the fancy railings among the geraniums. In the room, a sink with barely warm 'hot' water, a large mirrored clothes closet, and a bed with two fat pillows, a quilt and a kind of featherbed. One chair. Table with a print tablecloth.

The bathroom! Not a bathroom, but a WC - the difference is, that a WC contains only two vaguely toilet-looking pieces of furniture and one roll of prickly brown toilet paper. One of the 'things' is actually a toilet; the other, I found to my great embarrassment, is not. It is that peculiarly European invention called a bidet. It has two taps and a plug like a sink, but it is low, porcelain, and shaped like a shallow toilet. One inserts the plug, turns on the taps, and washes one's bottom in it! My mistake is a classic among les étrangers, I'm told. The toilet itself is located directly under a water tank suspended near the ceiling and connected to the toilet by a long pipe-stem. To flush, you pull a chain hanging from the tank, and water rushes down. Formidable!

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Walking with Midwest in the evening I remember streets of tall narrow houses, Siamese one-unto-another, with tiny, cobbled, iron-fenced-in front yards, all with maybe a few geranium plants in pots. Then there was an orange-rose sunset seen sudden between the tall houses, over the dim cobbles and cut off by a turn in the street.

Next day in the morning I stood waiting for a bus beside an extremely dirty, ragged boy who was reading Norman Vincent Peale's article in the English Reader's Digest. I said "Do you like Norman Vincent Peale?" and he said, "Oh, you're American." And that was how I met John-the-Dirty who was just about to find a ride back to the United States on Icelandic after six months of hitchhiking - nicknamed 'the animal,' he was an animal of sorts - wildly long-haired, bristling beard in all directions, toes protruding from sneakers, odor, high good spirits, so many good times to talk about that he couldn't leave me a word-space even when he wanted to be polite; effusive, friendly, colloquial, oddly accented in a sort of Boston cockney, unforgettable. And lonesome. So when I told him my hotel was cheap he came there too (and the concierge, a black-eyed and big-eyed Italian, gave me a "verre de vin rouge comme commis." (You'll have to learn French, family-o, because to translate or paraphrase ruins the lovely rollll of that French) and shared his supper of rye bread, processed cheese, and red wine.

That evening - Tuesday - he walked with me across the Pont Albert to the Ancienne Citadele, the medieval part of Luxembourg which is surrounded by small rivers and high walls. We rested our elbows on the ancient walls and looked across the river at the many bridges, the old, old viaducts, the high turreted roofs, the lights in the dusty color of another sunset. I love the AGE of Europe. In the morning we finished John's bread and cheese (and for milk, I resourcefully dissolved an envelope of powdered cream from the airplane in warm water) and he gave me all sorts of useful advice and junk he wouldn't need now that he's going home - his youth hostel manual, a cord, soap, toilet paper (it isn't supplied - "This is a pedestrian gift but you'll be glad for it" he said) and a sliver-sized can opener. And with that - off to the train.

French trains! Not long cars with many seats, but a long car with many compartments separated from a narrow corridor by sliding doors like this: [sketch]. And who should sit down in my compartement but two handsome French soldats on their way to Switzerland, one of them an instituteur or public school teacher reading a book of poetry. [missing pages]

[undated postcard]

En train à Strasbourg

I'm going to send you a postcard from every country I visit.

Spent Monday and Tuesday in Luxembourg at the cheap Hotel Italia. Met a Bostonian (very ugly) named John and went to see some of the very old and beautiful towers and walls and bridges of the ancient city of Luxembourg. In this city everyone speaks three and a half languages - French, High German, Luxemburgers (a Dutch-sounding dialect enough like Low German to understand) and a little English. I try to speak French most of the time but switch into English when I have trouble. I'm writing a long account for you but can't get it ALL on a postcard - thrilled to be here. (We just crossed into France.)

[airgramme]

8 rue des Hirondelles, Neuhof, Strasbourg
Sunday, 17 October 1965

The above is my address. And a beautiful address it is. You'll have to learn to pronounce it: ew-eet rew days eer-rawn-del-uh. And it means number eight, Street of the Swallows.

Neuhof is on the outskirts of Strasbourg, a small village in itself, with fields of (I think) parsnips, several small épiceries (grocery shops), several cafés and débits de vin (bars where wine and bière are sold), small houses with large gardens, cobbled streets, a small Catholic church with a steeple.

My room is on the second floor of the house of Madame Degen with the rooms of two other students, Nicole and a boy from the Cameroons. Downstairs live Madame Degen, le monsieur (her husband I suppose), her mother, and her daughter Lili who is about seventeen I'd say. For 120 francs a month I am living in paradise (translate francs into dollars by dividing by 5). Madame Degen, like Mrs Wold, likes to "have things nice." Her house is beautiful. In the hallway and the stairs, the wood is polished so that all her beautiful plants are reflected in it. And my room! Two windows: one looks northward onto a neighbouring garden with grass, flowers, four tall spruce trees, and a beautiful half-timbered tile-roofed garage with grape vines growing over it. My east window is a set of French doors opening onto a long iron balcony over the street!!! Both have exquisite lace curtains. The walls are papered in light green and the ceiling is white. It's furnished with an elegance that astounds me - a long bed with a high carved headboard (embroidered sheet, a pillow as big as a body, a gold satin bedspread-quilt, and a feather comforter which sits on the bedspread like a benevolent rectangular cloud.

The Cameroons boy just got back from church - he is small, froggish, ugly, dis-spirited and his name is Pierre. Nicole is also small, rather spiritless, and somewhat ugly. Lili is ugly too, but livelier. And Madame? Well yes, ugly too, but very good and friendly - large, red-faced, with a gold tooth and her hair done up somehow. Le monsier is nice-looking and rather quiet. I saw him yesterday, walking in the rain with his beret and wooden shoes on.

And breakfasts! For 1 franc or less per day, one wakes up to find, on the stair landing, a tray with a pitcher of milk, a pot of black coffee, a large coffee cup turned upside down over three lumps of sugar, and a napkin-covered plat with a croissant and two slabs of raisin bread. One heats the pot of coffee over a small burner that the madame leaves in the room, adds the milk, and voila! Two cups of beautiful café-au-lait. This is the traditional continental breakfast, le petit déjeuner.

I have a friend, Férdinand (Fayrrdeen-awn] who has been my mentor for the past few days. His patience with my French is formidable. Besides helping me buy a bicycle, he and I have worked out a system for eating cheaply, a system which is on the very edge of being inspired. He has a student card which enables him to eat in certain student restaurants for a franc and a half. What we do is walk in together and find a table. Then he goes to the cafeteria lineup, shows his card, and comes back to the table with a tray full of food. While he eats the soup, I eat the main course. Then he goes back to the lineup for seconds of the main course and some more bread. Then we share the dessert and drink elaborate toasts (water) to 'our system'.

After our supper last night we went on to the Cité Universitaire which is a kind of student's union, and watched television. Most of it is still too fast for me, but I get most of the ideas if not the words, with the help of explanations from Férdinand. Everything here is a terrific hurdle, even such simple things as taking a bus and asking directions, and everything - every word overheard - is an education.

The buses, by the way, are tout différent. You get in at the back, and pay your fare according to the distance you're going, to a man in a small cage. Yesterday, as I paid the fare, the man pressed my hand warmly and winked - all sorts of things happen. And yesterday morning, just as I was boarding a bus, the ticket taker leaped from the bus, dodged the traffic across the street, grabbed a bunch of roses from a stand, thrust some money at the fleuriste and ran back to the bus, all while the bus stopped briefly to pick up passengers.

The French vocabulary most useful seems to be the sentences for "What is it?" and "How do you say ...?" Those and "oui" and "merci" seem to be the essentials.

I've seen Peter. I asked the housing centre if he'd registered there - he hadn't - and then found his address at the foreign student registration centre. (Got lost on the way there, and a kind man in a beret took my arm and went all the way with me to make sure I got there - since my confused French had convinced him it was impossible for me to understand directions.) Le Monsieur Dyck wasn't home so I went into his room and snooped in his stuff - he has a corncob pipe and he's extremely tidy - and as I was sitting and waiting a good-looking Frenchman came in looking for him. Not long after, Himself arrived looking actually handsome after the food and company of his Cunard Line trip across the ocean. (The French have a very copy-able custom of greeting and taking leave of people by kissing them on both cheeks - which he did. He said that when his friend the Frenchman and the housing bureau told him there was a dame looking for him, he had decided to pretend great wrath because everywhere he went, there I was, but he hadn't had the heart to carry out his plot. It was good to see him and so good to speak English again that we've vowed never to speak French to each other. He is still looking for a room because the hotel where he is staying is too expensive though magnificent. He seems happy to be here, and he's more his usual expansive self than he was last June. He was in Paris for a while, and has been here a week longer than I.

I arrived last Tuesday, early afternoon, on the train from Luxembourg, left my bags at the station, and walked directly to the university. Was completely confused there, by the ununderstandable French directions for registering posted on the bulletin boards, and walked to the Auberge de Jeunesse, the youth hostel. Gravel roads, high heels, the heavy bag, tired feet from so much walking, and two kilometers to go! A truck driver finally stopped and - in French - offered me a ride which I was glad to accept. But - after a block or three I noticed the numbers along the street, and in a very small voice said "Je pense que nous l'avons passé." At which he stopped and explained apologetically that he couldn't turn around and I would have to walk back. Getting back was even further than walking there would have been in the first place, especially because I missed the sign and walked three blocks past - then three blocks back - and then I found that the hostel was set far back from the road. Finally I arrived, to find the hostel full of young shrill Germans. But I got a room - 3F per night - and there was even hot water in the showers. It seems that the Strasbourg hostel is both the largest and the nicest in France, and it was very good. I stayed there for three nights and yesterday (bags strapped onto the back of the bicycle, pedaling in the rain) moved here. At the hostel I met Angèle from Belgium who is at the university here too, and three brothers from London who are working part time to make enough money to study at the university. Going to university here is very cheap - there is no tuition fee, only a student's union fee of 60F or 12 dollars for things like a student card and medical insurance.

At student restaurants, meals for 30¢ each. Rooms are fairly cheap and many girls get free lodging in exchange for four or five hours of housework. Many boys have jobs. So you can go to university with no debts and no scholarships although many students seem to have bourses of some kind.

Madame was just up to show me how to light my stove and to tell me not to throw things into the toilet and to reassure me that I can come in when I like ("Pas de lois ici") and have friends up, even masculine, "as long as they don't stay the night." She's Protestant in an area that is mainly Catholic, and is glad to have another in the house. She's unbelievably good to me - and I was expecting to live friendless in a garret.

Would you please send this on to the Dycks in New York. I want to send them a long letter but postage to the States is more expensive than to Canada so I'll have to wait until I get my money from the Fed Govt loans.

(I got a letter from Norman in Lebanon - he's begun to study after a month of traveling and a, quote, "passionate attachment to Rome".)

Mother wonders whether I'm eating - it's alright Mother - between dinners with Peter and 'the system' with Férdinand and tomatoes (12¢ for a kilo), grapes (20¢ for a kilo), and bread that are so cheap in the market, survival is easy. And Madame Degen's munificent petit déjeuners!

PS especially to Uncle Harvey and Auntie Anne - the flight to Luxembourg was very uneventful - no breakdowns over the Atlantic as you predicted Uncle! But coming down over the green fields and tweed-colored woods in Luxembourg, seeing Europe coming closer and closer, the small villages, all the pointed roofs of Luxembourg itself, the church steeples, the networks of crooked roads, was probably the most thrilling thing I've ever done.

PS in general - the reason French bread has such thick crusts is that it is carried strapped on the bicycles, unwrapped, and has to withstand all sorts of weathering.

PS It's amazing to discover that Europe actually exists.

19 octobre

I am having a love affair with the landlady. Yesterday I came home to find that she'd lit the fire and given me a pot of flowers. Today I found that she'd aired the room - and just now she was up with "un petit déssert," some rice pudding with raisins and brandy in it, "pour vous." She is a landlady whose peace and goodwill are limitless. I leave her billets-doux on the breakfast tray when I leave in the morning, to say thank you.

Speaking of love affairs, Peter seems in much better spirits although he hasn't found a room yet and needs to unpack his suitcases, both spiritual and material. He knows reams of pretty girls from the U of Toronto group who crossed on the boat with him and he goes about looking very worldly and debonair. He was here to see me on Sunday afternoon: at seven o'clock we both became very hungry, so we went out into the rue des Hirondelles to find a restaurant still open. The first we went to was full of excited dogs and people watching television, and they served only beer and wine. So we had to retreat among the stares of both people and dogs.

At the other end of the street was a corner restaurant which was, in contrast ("It must be the food that drives 'em away" Peter whispered) completely empty except for the patronne leaning on the counter with two red elbows. Peter fished out a franc, for which we got six selections on the jukebox; French, English and German. One - the choicest of our choices - was "Ein Indianer aus Winnipeg"! While we were punching jukebox buttons, the patronne brought two plates of what Peter evidently ordered, a carafe of white wine, and a pile of bread (one doesn't eat it with butter here!). The order was one marinated (raw) herring on a pile of marinated (raw) onion rings; we assured each other that it was delicious between our clenched teeth.

[undated journal]

My malady is more a lack than a pain - I lack the joy which has been the one good strong aspect of my personality, on which all my strength and goodness are based. Without it I am unable to reach out, unable to give, unable even to cherish for myself. I miss the arrogance of that joy and its ability to cherish most of all. With that joy of life my motivation to write is lost as well. One cannot write out of apathy for only more apathy is created. (Is that why I disliked Age of Reason and why I love Olivia?)

Without that joy there is a desperation - find it again: keep it, hold it! - that makes me want to go through all the gestures of joyfulness, follow all the old paths backwards, write and write, run down streets at night, long for it with the agony of Chateaubriand. Last year I told Olivia "Sometimes it goes away but it always comes back." Does it? Is it something organic that ceases to be secreted after adolescence?

Sadness to me seems some very shameful weakness of character which must not be confessed for it ruins friendships and destroys loves. Don't need anything, anyone, for your need is a frightening sore that drives away those you need.

And Peter - I've needed him a little because I have no friends here yet. I'm standing Férdinand up today: later I'll have to work out in French the phrases to tell him how painful it is to be with him because I am restricted to stuttering imbecilities when I need comradely eloquence! And because my joylessness has left me very needy, very vulnerable, without my basic independence and resiliency to débrouiller.

As for Peter - the first rule in his care and keeping is never need him, let him need you. Result: I sway between avoiding him and seeking him out. Noticeably?

There are moments of encouragement. He kisses goodnight warmly and thoroughly, well. But not often!

Oberkirch, Saturday 23 Oct

[journal]

Now the stream of mostly ugly German tourists has begun. Can I tell them to step out of my sunlight and leave me to solitary meditation in my Diogenes sleeping bag? "Natur Mensch!" I'm contrasting Eric [?] with these blowing hairy men - he's a man. The women shriek a great deal and are even uglier than the men. I love the German countryside but these people ...

[letter]

I'm sitting crosslegged on the wall of an old chateau-fortress, eating bread and cheese with cold fingers. My sleeping bag and poncho are drying from the dew in a very feeble early-morning sun, and my feet are drying after an expedition down through the gatehouse, over the drawbridge, and around to the ivy-hung door of the outer walls - to steal a few bunches of still-green grapes for breakfast.

Yesterday morning, Friday, after an arid class and after trying with no success to squeeze a little human companionship out of Peter, and drifting a little as the current of my mind kept pushing me off the pebbly shores of reality onto metaphysical gulf-streams much beyond my depth, I went home very sad and lost - and decided, in desperation, to bootstrap myself out of this clinging desolation, to pack my bicycle and follow the first good road I found into Germany for the weekend. So I bought a cheap bottle of red wine, and some camembert, packed the rucksack and tied it onto the back of the bicycle with bread strapped on top, and told Madame Degen "Je pars pour l'Allemagne. Je ne reviendrai que peut-être demain, peut-être dimanche, peut-être lundi. Donc, pas de petit déjeuner demain!"

"Vous n'allez pas seule?" she said with a visible effort at minding her own business. "Oui." (That "oui" a little sadly.)

Past the canal boats in their canals, waiting to go down the Rhine to Switzerland or up the canal to Paris, the long arched bridge over the Rhine (wide and pleasant with trees on both sides). The German town of Kehl on the other side, and a handsome custom officer who said "Sie sprechen aber gut Deutch!" when I gave him my passport.

A narrow road out of Kehl, skirting turnip fields and half-timbered German village houses where the large trucks going by barely had room to pass me (I was carried along in the aftercurrent of those going my direction and swamped by the wake of those passing from the front).

Soon, a forested hilly country with the village of Nussbach at the bottom of a slow apple-tree-planted curve. Just outside the town, a roadside crucifixion with the inscription "Aus Dankbarkeit für den glucklichen Verlauf der Ruhrepidemie im Jahr 1*73 errichtet." A small church with the inside whitewashed except for a wonderful handcrafted and painted ceiling.

Blue hills, sun fading in the fog, gardens with kerchiefed women and men in blue denim burying huge piles of turnips (I saw a field belonging to a convent being cultivated by two nuns and an ox), apple trees nearly bare but studded with small hard apples, a long slow descent into a wide valley filled with vineyards and a village - Oberkirch! By accident, I'd come to the Kinderchor town. Best of all, across the valley nearly at the summit of a steep vine-covered hill, were the ruins of an old castle. By now I was thirty kilometers from Strasbourg and it was late afternoon. So - up the hill to the castle, barefoot, sweating with the effort of dragging the heavily loaded bicycle nearly a half mile uphill, stared at by many eyes in the farmhouses beside the road, thrilled by my resolution to live in the castle for the rest of the weekend. [The castle was the fortress of Schauenberg.]

Finally the top of the hill and the memorable picture of my bicycle with the packsack and loaf of bread tied onto it leaning against the ancient stone gate hung with centuries' growth of ivy, framed by a Gothic arch built in 1170! A running exploration: two corner towers still standing five stories high but without a roof, one long narrow roofed crypt, a covered gatehouse in excellent repair with an ancient fleur-de-lis carved into the entrance doorway, an underground room with a wooden door that can still swing shut, a circle stairway carved in stone, which once led to a now-vanished room above the crypt, and a wide stone wall with narrow arrow slots built into it enclosing about as much area as half of Sexsmith High's gym.

Then supper sitting on the west wall watching the sun dissolve away in a bank of fog across the valley; bread torn into chunks, smeared with the soft camembert, with the very rough unpleasant wine - which nevertheless put me nearly to sleep. Bed was a pile of dried leaves in a corner of the walls. But not much sleep: the struggle to keep warm and many half-thoughts, half-dreams kept me awake through countless tollings of the Oberkirch cathedral bell. Dark massive walls all around, stars through the branches of a beech tree overhead, surely a pocket of warm air somewhere, Olivia, Joyce Detweiler, Charles, Danny, Frank, Mother ... I dreamed a dark young man was climbing the corner wall with a knife unsheathed in his hand, and when I had struggled with him and taken the knife away from him, I saw it was Paul. And when I looked around, the castle was full of people camping out - and there was Mother: I tried to tell her what strange dreams I had been having ... Don, Rasheed, Father, Susie ... Simone de Beauvoir ... dry leaves creeping into the sleeping bag ... Peter, Janeen ... a cold haunch; and finally morning - even colder, and wet.

But the sun cut through the fog finally and began to pick out red tile roofs in the village and the many-colored trees on the hillside behind the castle to the east. A warm corner among the moss on the east walls, grapes for breakfast and the smoke and stirrings of the farmyard below to watch. Men going out to the vineyards with baskets on their shoulders, another man digging a pit and filling it with turnips which he covered with straw and then buried. A child ran all the way down the hill swinging a pail and calling to a dog which was already far ahead of her. Not ten minutes later, the dog came back up the hill with a bent old woman, following the exact path the child had taken down - it startled me (what Balfour Gallivan would call a "metaphysical shudder") and I was relieved when the child finally came back half an hour later, running all the way uphill as well as down.

Spent the rest of Saturday morning talking to the farmers, and the afternoon talking to German tourists and writing journal, wrapped in the sleeping bag, lying on the broad west wall in a patch of sun. Slept much better that night.

Sunday morning was grey, cold and wet so I packed up as soon as it was light and went flying downhill into Sunday morning Oberkirch, a motley apparition in dirty yellow hooded sweatshirt and bluejeans, shoeless and whistling! On the road it was cold, and the fog condensed on my hair was running down my face, so I stopped at a Gasthof, in Nussbach again, where I sat by the stove and a bus driver (very Teutonic looking, blond) bought me a Glüwein and told me that I was in luck - today was St Wendel's day (Saint Wendel is the patron of horses and riders) and there would be a parade in the afternoon. The Gasthof was large and warm, the coffee was good, the Glüwein was excellent, Hans the bus driver and his two attractive friends were lively company, so I changed my clothes (the suit you made is admired a great deal, Mother) and like Hans and his friends, sat beside the fire until time for the parade. The Gashof was nearly full of people from the surrounding area who had come to Nussbach for the afternoon, and whole families or just a father with several daughters came in and sat down, the father with a beer and the daughters or small boys with a real American Coke.

As dinner came nearer, the Gasthof family had more business than they have for the rest of the year, I'm sure - everyone nattering some German dialect I didn't understand at all. Hans very apologetically bought me dinner, Schnitzel und Noodeln. He said he meant no harm by it but "Ich habe gesehen, das Sie nicht viel Geld haben." And as we ripped into our excellent Schnitzeln mit Noodeln, the three men, who all drive tour buses all over Europe with chartered tourist buses, started telling stories.

Hans told this one: "Ich sass mal in ein Zug, wissen Sie, und nach eine Weile kommt ein älterer Mann herein und setzt sich gegenuber hin. Auf ein mal sagt er, ganz freundlich, 'Junger Mann, setzen Sie mir bitte das linke Bein auf die Bank.' So dachte ich, was ist dies? Aber ich setzte sein linkes Bein auf die Bank. Wir fahren ein Bischen weiter. Plötzlig sagt er wieder, 'Junger Mann, setzen Sie mir bitte auch das rechte Bein auf die Bank.' Ich hab's getan, aber dan redet ich im an: 'Nun, was haben Sie einfach?' Und er sagt mir, ganz frech, 'Vereien.'"

In the afternoon the parade with horses and riders in costume, many of them really beautiful horses with flowers in their bridles. Then drove on home the next twenty kilometers to Strasbourg and had a bath.

You are about to ask, "But what about school - don't you ever go?" It is true that the last two days have been so amazing, so summer that I spent the one sitting on the Goethe statue steps talking to Peter and the other driving through the forests and small towns of Alsace with Frédie Conrad about whom I'll tell you when I have more room.

But - many of the courses are very good and I have lots of French literature to read - I also want to take Spanish in night courses and join the university choir to learn French songs. On the 4th the pianist Artur Rubenstein will be here and I hope to go. There is also an opera house here, and a Comédie, and many movie theatres.

Had some 'new wine' in a pub last night with two English girls and Peter: it's a very queer looking cloudy greenish brew that tastes like sour grape juice.

In the country on Thursday, saw the farmers bringing their grapes to the presses in huge vats; would like to work at picking grapes for a while - my room is full of flowers, roses, anemones, and colored leaves.

Father would go mad if he saw the Strasbourg streets because in most of them, not a single house is built square.

Peter seems to be happier, he's still looking for a room, he knows crowds of American girls, but I'm a little disappointed in him: our 'friendship' has progressed in leaps to the place where he can tell me all his troubles, but not any further to the place where he's interested in mine!

Interruption: for the past three hours Pierre, who has turned out to be a honey and not really ugly after all, has been reading one of my plays (required reading) aloud to me, as a favour. Everyone is very good. I'm a little lonely but very happy.

Wednesday, October 27

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A painting downtown, which I must have, 120 francs! It is a long picture of a girl seen from behind, with flowing cobwebby hair and a Botticelli gown that bares the almost comic lines of her bottom - all this in an intense pink - by someone called Fini, a modern. It is me, today and on my best days; I love it.

Today, sat for hours, talking in torrents, with Peter on the steps of the Goethe memorial. Sun, exhilaration, the two steeples of St Paul's among the yellow trees.

Coming home, riding through the small garden plots near the empty field, with a wild sunset, blue streetlights, and a jet airplane, a line-drawn moon and my bicycle floating.

I am amazed by my life. (Is this why, unlike Peter and Frank, I do not suffer from my lack of absolutes?) Watching it happen, placing it around me like furniture in a room, and gathering pictures like the Fini young girl for it (pictures that explain, illustrate, decorate, my life) are thrilling - and the combination of chance and 'purpose,' chance sometimes as terrifying as Joyce Detweiler's death and purpose sometimes as confounding as my defection from Christianity, gave it suspense. (Tom Hathaway: "I couldn't ever commit suicide, I'm too curious, life is too strange" - and I cherish you Tom).

It is égoisme to place so much importance on the evolvement of my own life and even to base my metaphysics on joy; but without this core of égoisme the ability to cherish is lost, and with it all 'goodness', love, charity and professional usefulness.

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31 Octobre, Sunday

This follows at the heels of the letter I mailed you this morning and is more a continuation than an entity.

No one knows about Hallow'en here; instead we have Toussaint tomorrow: celebrated by both Catholics and Protestants it is the day of the dead. Everyone goes to the cemeteries where the family dead are buried with flowers for the graves. Outside the cemetery itself, the flower hawkers and chestnut sellers make a killing: the atmosphere is that of a fair rather than a day of mourning. But the old women dressed all in black mumble their grief to themselves and carry a clump of purple plastic orchids to their family's grave (often bodies are superimposed on each other in the same grave, here; land is so expensive). There is a band for the Monday morning service for the dead. Evidently Toussaint is not meant to be only a day of mourning, but a day of celebration of the saints which the individual dead believed in.

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Tuesday after Toussaint, 2 novembre

Ferdinand: his bare clean room full of jazz records, his sweet vermouth, his butter bread for lunch, the old courtyard outside his windows and the clouds scuttling (Oh Frank!) across the sky above the ragged tiles. Ferdinand with the holes in his clothes, Ferdinand with his burning burning black eyes and his curling black beard, with his mouth - Ferdinand and 'blues' and Luigi Tenco tearing our hearts out of our bodies.

The beautiful tu of the French language: "Je veux être tres honnête à toi, tres bonne à toi. Je peux t'aimer un peu - pas tout à fait, mais un peu. C'est assez?" "Sincèrement, tu m'aimes?" As honest and good as a child - Ferdinand. "J'ai peur. J'ai peur de t'aimer trop." "Quelle sorte d'entente pouvons-nous avoir? Nous resterons toujours des étrangers?" "Tu est la? C'est toi?" "Je suis un homme, je suis pauvre, je suis un être faible. J'ai peur de te faire mal."

Ferdinand - the directness of his need and the directness of his enjoyments (cognac, jazz, bread and jam, warmth), his way of walking away down the street.

I feel myself watching this new thing in my life, careful that it remain in control, but aware of a terrible youth in its desire for goodness and a terrible age in its compromises.

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Sunday, at the Haut-Bas ruins near Saverne with Frédi Conrad: the piece of bark he found and put on the wall: stuffed with grass and with eyes and teeth of white pebbles it was "unser kleiner Krocodile" and typical of his way of, also, creating his life around himself from the often-meagerness of his surroundings.

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Tuesday night: "Et tu apporteras ta chemise?"

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Saturday 6 November

My topic today, liebe Zuhörer, is a typical day in the life of an absent minded Canadienne beset on all sides by the French language, French culture, French drivers, French spite and French kindness, French fog, French damp chill and the bitter frustration of French bureaucracy.

7 a.m. wake up at this first feeble crack of dawn and creep out to the hallway to see if Madame has brought up my breakfast yet, but she hasn't. I knew it was too early. So I turn on the stove and get back into bed. Five minutes later I'm still thinking about breakfast so I get up again and see if it's there. Like a miracle, it is. Wrapped up snugly in a napkin, there are four slices of bread (four on a good day, only three on a bad day), my square of butter, my little jar of jam, and my pot of coffee - I dump all the milk and sugar into the coffee, put the coffee pot on my little gas lamp, and go back to bed as the coffee heats and starts to diffuse its good warm sugar-milk smell into the air.

While it is heating I read Simone de Beauvoir's La force de l'age. I'm halfway through its 700 pages - by reading it every morning and every night I get a little friendly conversation with a kindred spirit and a good deal of French vocabulary. When the coffee is boiling hot I butter my bread and put on a little hint of jam (careful not to lose the taste of the bread and butter - then I eat the rest of the jam with a spoon: it's very strong and boiled brown like Grandma Epp's jams). Then I put the whole tray on a chair and have breakfast in bed, still reading Simone de Beauvoir and eating the bread and butter very slowly: it is so good that I don't want to finish it. When the last crumb is gone I sigh a huge elaborate sigh and faithfully get out of bed. By now the room is nearly warm enough to inhabit anyway. Meantime the [wash] water has been heating over the gas stove - we haven't any hot water except for Saturday.

By 8:30 I'm outside on my bicycle going to school: I can check the time by the Catholic church tower clock - it is steaming cold and I drive most of the way with one hand (the French boys drive with great élan, flinging themselves along with both hands in their pockets and a great cloud of smoke streaming along behind them - but I'm not that good yet, and unfortunately don't smoke either).

It takes exactly half an hour to drive to the university from Madame Degen's, but once, racing a tractor most of the way (it was a brilliant, beautiful day) I made it in twenty minutes. The route to university follows first the main streets of Neuhof and Neudorf with small bake shops, two on every block, bread is basic here, and large funeral flower shops called Pompes Funèbres. Most of the window displays feature huge crosses of purple plastic flowers. Then I pass a military academy and wave to the boys hanging out the windows because they always whistle. Further along is the most interesting corner on the route, where several blocks of shanties meet, and where, at any time of day, one can see the migrant labourers - Italians, Sicilians, all black haired and swarthy with fine bones and masses of curls - and their families walking or waiting for buses or riding bicycles with small boys bumping along behind their fathers strapped onto the grocery carrier. On the next corner after that is the chestnut seller who has his small cart and roasting oven set up from early morning until late at night. We always say "bonjour" to each other when he isn't busy with a customer - he is a pleasant blond young man with staggered teeth.

Around the next bend, I get my first glimpse of the cathedral tower, dim in the fog, very tall, one of the tallest buildings in France. From then on the traffic of office girls on bicycles and motor scooters becomes heavy. For ankle connaisseurs this time of morning is paradisal, and, as Peter says, the French girls have remarkable ankles.

Over one bridge - past the canal boats still moored or beginning to move toward the locks - and then another - the quai along the two branches of the river Ile which knots around the centre of Strasbourg and was the boundary of the ancient city. Then along the quai past an old red stone church, past three pretty small pubs, past the black entrance to a laundress's cobbled courtyard, past a half dozen more pâtisseries, around delivery trucks parked midstreet delivering fresh vegetables to the grocery shops, and along another quai where the gendarme stands directing traffic in his hooded cape and white gloves (the traffic policemen are very graceful). Arrive in class just before the lecturer does, out of breath and very red-faced from the wind.

Just as an example of the classes I'll tell you about Vernois' Wednesday morning class: talking about modern French literature Monsieur Vernois was trying to explain the theory that by citing examples of various senses - smell, color, sound - it is possible to evoke one essential characteristic or meaning that they all have in common. And to explain he used this comparison: he said, "When I look at this classroom and all of you sitting there in front of me, I see you all dressed in different colors - red, blue, green, green again, brown, blue - but, looking at you, I see that you are all here, come from great distances, trying to understand a difficult idea expressed in a language that is strange to you, trying to understand something about man on earth." I was struck, and even moved, because it is seldom that a professor - or even we ourselves - sees in us what we basically and unchangingly are, even in France: students not of French but of life. I hope you can see through the pomposity of this last sentence to what I want to say.

Lectures are all and entirely in French, spoken a bit more slowly and carefully for the sake of the 'foreigners' but still very substantial French. I understand nearly everything but embarrass myself with my faux pas when answering questions: but little by little we're realizing that mistakes are exactly the right answers for the professor's teaching purposes and we're becoming bolder. Sometimes other people's mistakes are hilarious - for instance during a grammar lesson last Thursday, an earnest absent-witted American gave, as an example of a particular verb construction, the sentence "J'existe parce que je pense," little realizing that "I think, therefore I am" was French before it ever was English and that he had just retranslated Descartes' famous maxim into a French more laborious than the original. Chuckle by chuckle, the rest of the class caught on to his intention, and the roar of laughter that followed completely confused poor Redhead - but I shouldn't laugh, because during the same period I stunned the class by pronouncing "Dieu est mort," Nietzsche's prolamation. The sentence was fine, perfect - but an example of the wrong verb tense.

At lunch time, I join a mauling pushing mass of students in the lineup at a student restaurant where one of my 27¢ tickets buys me a complete meal, salad to dessert. The line moves very quickly after the initial incubation period in the foyer lineup - by the time it reaches the food it is spinning along at factory conveyor belt speed, and in a precise rhythm, you catch the tray that is thrown at you, grab as many pieces of bread as you can from the tin pan, select a dessert and try to avoid the everpresent yougourt (but if you're out of step you end up with the yougourt because it is last in the line), snatch a drinking glass, barely manage to keep your tin plate of main course from falling off the end of the counter, and spurt out of the end of the line. To get a place at the long tables you often have to deposit your tray by passing it across the table over someone else's food, and then rejoin it before someone steals your apple by running along the back of the bench behind the people already sitting there: "Pardon, pardon, pardon" still in assembly-line rhythm.

The food is usually affreux, frightful. The bread is dry and you eat it without butter. You drink water unless you can afford to buy wine, beer, or milk. Main course consists of a small taste of protein in the form of eggs or cheap meat or large bland sausages, with lettuce soaked in oil and vinegar and a huge pile of beans, potatoes, or rice - all very cheap carbohydrates, lots of calories and a substantial amount of food value at very low price.

I usually enjoy the meals because 1. they're food and 2. I'm usually in good company, Peter or Férdinand, and if I'm not, there are all the French students to watch. Most of the girls are quite ugly, but those who are attractive are stunning. They dress beautifully, mostly in tailored tweeds with hair ribbons and fragile shoes, and many have their hair done in classic French style - long, parted in the middle, and tied back with a bow at the nape of the neck. The boys too are either extremely runty or beautiful - the typical specimen, and there are many of the latter type, is tall, thin but well built, long-haired, with a face as beautifully boned as most of the European movie stars - they have a more finely modeled face than most Americans and are easy to recognize by this feature. The girls are distinguished from Americans here by what Peter calls their please-kiss-me pout which comes of speaking French all the time.

The city of Strasbourg falls into a deep siesta every day from 12 hours to 14 hours (yes we're on the 24 hour system here): it is strange to see everything, even the small businesses, wearing the sign "fermé jusqu'à 14 h" for two hours a day - but most of them stay open to six or seven too.

During this two hour vacuum I go to the library reading room or sit on the steps of the Goethe statue or go for a promenade - everything here, walking, bicycling, or driving, is a promenade - looking at Strasbourg. (More about that later.) Then I have classes again often until 7 o'clock. If I didn't eat at the student restaurant at lunch I go there for dinner and blow my one-per-day allotted meal ticket; or I go to watch the television news; or I go home and read or talk to Pierre or Nicole; or Peter invites me for a visit and a few crusts of dry bread saved from the restaurant.

Strasbourg has so many concerts, plays, and good movies that I'm desolée to have to miss them all - the five francs for a ticket. Last week I missed Artur Rubenstein!!! (Have you heard anything from the Can Fed Loan people? They're being incredibly slow. But my good angel continues to provide. Just when I was down to my last two francs, I discovered that I can get a refund of 43 francs which par erreur I paid unnecessarily in the confusion of the first week. If you don't hear from me for a while, though, you'll know I haven't the postage.)

8 novembre, Monday

I'm reading Figaro at the Aumonie Protestante, this afternoon, walking down the Route de la Forêt Noire to Eglise Saint-Bernard with its statue of Jeanne d'Arc (slight, face slim and childish, even in her armour appearing fragile: but I see Jeanne d'Arc as something not quite so ephemeral: I think she was tall and large-boned with a face like Joyce Detweiler young) with its long Gothic lace windows (I try to reconstruct it in my mind: while I was looking at the buttresses and the support shafts of the apse I thought that if I'm ever completely isolated I could build, re-form, castles and cathedrals in my mind.) Then, walking away from the cathedral with the sun powdered in red along the whole western sky, I came upon a new university building being constructed in massive curved slabs of concrete piled one on top of the other in the manner of a pagoda, with fragile X-forms supporting the whole at the base.

All this, and the fact that Peter finds Giroudoux's Intermezzo pointless ("I've come to the place where I think any damn fool can write about death")(and Baudelaire "a spoiled brat who thinks that he can make himself important by spending the rest of his life talking about death in terms of stink, shit, pus") makes me realize how little my judgment is cerebral - in literature as in all art, and for that matter in relationships of all sorts, my appreciation is nothing more than an expansive affection. And I'm beginning to like France and to want to understand it, swallow it whole.


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raw forming volume 5: september 1965 - september 1966
work & days: a lifetime journal project