time remaining 5 part 5 - 2017 may-july  work & days: a lifetime journal project

29 May

The sprinkler in its last seven minutes before eight.

I hobbled around the garden last afternoon with a stick, plucked weeds, tore off poppy leaves blocking seeded rows, looked to see are my charges alright. What to call that size of plums. They're the size of cherry pits. The bees worked, there are a lot of them. - Run-on sentences, why do I like them. Because they're correct for a specific slant of logical relation.

- Time to go turn it off.

- Then weeding for an hour. I like weeding the wildflower edge because the goosefoot, grass and I think it's salsify are there in the thick of many little plants their own size. The eye sorts within the pleasure of success, I seeded early enough so the flowers had rain when they were establishing. California poppy feathers, some chamomile and many little kinds I don't recognize. Since yesterday already a few flowers, baby blue eyes and a little white thing. People pass with their eyes down studying them.

I need to sort colors but haven't figured out zones. The orange Iceland poppies need to be with the darker blues and purples. Pale blues, yellows, white. Oranges and maroons of various shades. Pinks, yellows, white. Red, blue, white.

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It's a softer day, vapour and little clots. 5:07. Silent. There's the silver tree stirring its little tips as if by own motion as slight as breath. There the crab twins stolid lumps of lace. And you blue spruce my winter saviour ragged-edged black and still against the light.

After sunset I was on a cushion on the porch with my back against the house. It's a good spot but I couldn't arrive, it's still too much of a mess and the ugly street is too present. I fasten on things to do.

NDP-Green coalition announced.

The wonder book of the air. This time through what it is about it is that I imagined Tom when he was reading it. I read it the first time crying because it was so true about me with him. It wasn't until near the end of our years I thought he was steady and smart enough to read it himself. I inhaled it he said. We didn't talk about it more. Now I'm feeling how he must have seemed understood by it, forgiven. Then I think, how can he have written off a woman who could give him that book. Even if she could not write it, which I am very very far from able for.

I've been on email today with Louie who is in struggle about whether to cut her hair. Reading Shearer another thing I'm feeling is that Louie has shied off the whole range of female being that took Shearer so deep and real, I had to leave her behind when she wouldn't talk to me about Tom.

Had been thinking of Leslie today - the way she said "precision" when I said "Precision Landscaping," the way when I offered her Shearer she took the day off work and sat all morning reading in the sun. Thinking I'd want to say to her that it's always given me pleasure to look at her. Then just now a note saying she's driving through from Van to Williams Lake a week from tomorrow and could she stay overnight.

There was a brief rough storm this afternoon, large drops blasted from the south rattling against the kitchen windows, thunder, sky splitting in golden cracks.

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Started clearing out the verandah, no more seedlings. Tugged the pear out of its peat pot and planted it better. Both the Blanc Double and Thérèse are blooming though mediocrely. Sat an hour by the pay phone in the library sorting the DMV's claim for back registration fees. Brought home library books and groceries. Went to Planet Hair and asked Nicole for a cut, $24. Waited till nearly seven to turn on the sprinkler. There's a June wind I thought must be hard on the soft newly planted cucumber leaves. My knee still gets sore and that leg looks swollen.

June 2nd

Sun from the horizon has touched just one feather at the tip of the silver tree. Lit silver against grey cotton sliding north.

Media City does not want my videos.

Powder blue iris with a scent of passionfruit.

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I was doing something in the garden. High school girls coming up the sidewalk laughing. When they're almost past the one nearest the street calls out Lovely garden you have. What charmed me was her grammar.

This aft I drove the back way into A&W's take-out window and then took my ice cream cone to sit on the river bank. Lombardy poplars and a fine big willow standing in water to their knees. The river is full up, an opaque creamy pale brown moving as a sheet swift in the middle and geared slower at the sides. A fascinating motion, why. Its even relentlessness, the way it is a sheet of surface holding flat and reflective amid all those anchored things, the grass bank, the chokecherry trees, the fence slats of houses and the roofs above them, and at the same time sleekly swiftly inevitably always coming and always gone. Headlong.

Cleaned the verandah this morning feeling it a ritual that will always mark the beginning of summer.

Look at the silver tree frolicking. Is it because the leaves are young that it looks fluffier than it did. The blue spruce doesn't frolic, it has a firm spine that gives it the dignity of an elder - maybe it's the way its many arms sway sideways that reminded me of the Salish women dancing in West Van.

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Why was that event so dreary. All those heavy women. Bad staging. Civic effort. A mercilessly dull even light. Fiddle not well enough played. Daphne smiling and smiling and greeting at the door. The usual, seeing no one who will come for me. I got up and came home.This morning a field of bloomed-out tulips. I was trying to find someone to tell that they should be dead-headed. A new Chinese department store with green marble panels crooked or broken; it seemed the whole building was foundering . I have no energy for Merritt social life that can come to nothing. I don't want the irrelevance of it in my head.

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Her little dog when she let it out climbed onto my lap and then my chest straining to get to my face. I had hold of its tight quivering straining little body looking into its stupid intent little face marveling at its unknowability. Is that her daemon? That small strong stupid mystifying determination to get at? She fights with her neighbours about their dogs and wanted to go on too long complaining about them.

"We don't die" she said and I'm wondering whether some credulity in her is illustrated by the way her lovely and interesting plants are invaded by unweeded stalks of old grass.

There are wonderful things in her garden too. I sat staring up at three very tall lombardy poplars swaying so very lightly against the blue sky. By her pond a perfect Japanese grouping of flat blue iris on long stems among long slender leaves with two metal cranes and a bristle-edged bronze gunnera.

A Cree wedding with a man who died falling off a mountain. A lover who shot himself. Twins born at 22, a girl and a boy. A married woman named Joy she has loved for 45 years. Many stories to come. She's careful about hearing too much of mine though she does ask some. When I'd talked about Tom for a long paragraph she got up and said she needed to pee.

Long dream this morning about being left with an inferior baby. Its parents were a showy but unattractive dark haired woman and a pale recessive man who were some sort of poets and had been traveling. They'd handed the baby, who was puny and slow, to the man I was with. I thought they might not be back. We were carrying it through the city. At one point we were winding downstairs in a library picking up CDs to take with us.

"The same kind of bodies, bloodless and bent," there it is, why Media City has gone off me. Fair enough though a high price.

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A tree peaony. A silver-lace vine. Red strawberries. Took photos of all the trees in the rain and some of the roses.

Les being here Wednesday night. I forgot the pork chops and dried them out but the baked potatoes and baked rhubarb were alright. We sat on the verandah couch holding glasses of white wine in the dark. I sometimes noticed I had my arm clamped over my solar plex but I didn't know why. Couldn't sleep in the narrow bed, was that why in the morning I found myself exhausted the way I have sometimes been with Louie, wiped out so I can hardly move my mouth to respond to another word. Does that only happen with women. The first time I remember it is with my mom in London, when I had to go huddle by Luke's bed in the other room.

She asked whether I am working. I said it's too soon to tell.

I wonder whether what exhausts me is how much I speak from repertoire. It's a kind of fear isn't it, of not being anything in the moment.

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Was I afraid of her      yes
Afraid of being seen as less than I was      yes
Am I      no
Did she think I was      yes
Is there any way now to boil up in the way I used to      no
So in what way am I not      less generous, and responsible, in processing, mourning
Aging is genuinely shameful      YES
Do I HAVE to speak from repertoire      YES
Do you understand the exhaustion      yes
It's the confluence expected of female conversation      yes
Is it a sign of being sucked dry      no
 
CAN I still do the work I want to do      yes
Is the sketchup project a way to it      no
Do I have to have a new computer to do it      yes

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Always again groping for a reader. Working on the Titania notes I imagine sending it to Cheryl and then as always I doubt she'd want it. Working on the poetics page Colin, he even more doubted.

Next to me the delicate scent of the first Alnwick, a frail shell-pink shell-curved thing that suits its scent. It's a bit pathetic.

-

June wind from the south. Russian olive tossing like young excitement. Motion indescribable, never freezing, never repeating. What happens at the apex of strong gusts is like an ecstasy, the windward side of the tree folds north so its underleaves flash polished silver. I feel it as a thrill in my solar plex. I can't believe how marvelous it is. Staring at it I'm on my edge of vision. It's partly the structure of the tree. The canopy is loose and complex, like Tom's eugenia a lot of long flexible trunks themselves branching into many long flexible branchlets so there are a lot of independently moving parts. At its feet the crab canopies are stolid in comparison, thick and simple.

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My attitude is not good      YES
I'm angry      yes
Can you say why      at having to feel sorry for
Is that legitimate      no
You mean a claim      yes
Can you suggest a corrective      consider generosity as readiness for action
Action being a pleasure in itself      YES
I've been considering action a cost      yes
There is a cost in energy      no
Action gives energy      yes
Consider it as creative      YES
Was I better with Leslie      no
Dutiful not inspirited      yes
Thank you      yes

-

Brought home such a pretty greengage plum and a salvia officinalis Nazareth with large blue flowers. Wound home among slopes blue with lupin, verges sparkling with long grass and small daisies.

A prophet of ancient lineage showing the whites of his eyes as if affrighted by visions. I gaze disbelieving.

Drove the fast fierce Coque, drove and drove lost in the city, curved and uncurved and rose and fell on graceful 5a with engine growl and wind whipping my hair. Now I'm going to bed.

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I'm getting worn out suppressing impatience.

This morning Midday Valley Road through pines and flowers. High ledge winding above summer vales. Yarrow, toadflax, daisies, mustard.

Planted the plum, replanted the apricot and nectarine. Hyssop seedlings. Grecian foxglove by the other yellows under the lattice. Oriental poppies. Oh the plum - I keep looking at its stalwart little shape with arms outstretched along the fence.

A south wind again - it's 7:47 - and why does the Russian olive look different now. Its silver is not sharp-cut, it's fluffy not ecstatic. I didn't realize it was a rare moment.

Bowl of strawberries on the table for breakfast.

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Vendler on Yeats. [Our secret discipline: Yeats and lyric form 2007]

who wrote until he was seventy-three

poems are sites of speculation

Feeling two ways about her technical specifics. She can easily convince me that Yeats intended all the devices she describes - Petrarchian sonnet, rhyme riche, ottava rima, trimeter, chiasmus and the rest - and I can see that he has knit himself into the history of male poetics by means of them - and I can see that his effects are subtly exact - and I can understand that they are what has held his poems in cultural memory - and I can be a bit interested in learning to notice them - but at the same time I have no interest in the poems and her specifics seem to tell me why. There's something wrong with that kind of deliberation. Oh and at the same time I know my artlessness is wrong too. Here it is.

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I took him to the confluence and we were sitting on the bench above the rivers not saying much. He was on my right with his arm on the bench's back. He put out his thick-fingered clumsy old man's hand toward my shoulder and said "May I touch you?" Moment almost of panic, it was unthinkable but how was I going to say no without hurting him. I stammered. I said "Not really" and after a while said "Touching was easy when we were young but now it's too big a deal."

I hadn't slept well and all day was hiddenly impatient with his slowness and slurred speech and the way if I speak at normal speed he says "Pardon me?". Tried this and that to make up for it. Took him to Coyote Valley Road and yes there were blue spikes of viper's bugloss all over the field, yarrow, brown-eyed susan, pale chartreuse buckwheat, that flat sticky yellow aster. Buffalo currants in fine silvery leaf. A meadowlark. He did like that. In the evening got out two glasses of Glenlivet to see whether it wd loosen us. It did but not happily. He got stupid and I talked about Tom on and on. He said "I'm sure he's alright" and I rode him down. "Why do you think that?" "I'm just reassuring you." "You don't have to do that. Why do you think so." "I just feel it." "Do you have any grounds?" "No." "Then it's useless." I liked how it felt to be swift and direct rather than careful as I had been all day, and when I got up to do the dishes I felt how swift and direct my movements were at the sink as if I were beating on him with physical contrast.

I'm doing the physical host thing as well as I can. He has the good bed. I'm providing drives, a pretty guestroom with flowers, good food, some from my garden. Two trips to Kamloops to pick him up and take him back to the airport. Buying groceries. But also doing what I do when I'm averse to someone, going away into my own stories with the false pretext of entertaining him.

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So resentful, is that the word. All the time trying to hide contempt I think must be unfair. The sound of his shuffling. Remarks I don't understand and assume aren't worth repeating. His energylessness as a companion. What I suspect is a long habit of wanting to be taken care of. What seems to be his lack of liking for the wonderful places I've taken him. I drove him the glorious loop west on 8 to Spence's Bridge and then north to Ashcroft and then back home past the mine - green valleys, colored cliffs, sage slopes, pine forests, hills swathed with lupin, the Nicola, the Thompson, Ashcroft's old streets, the mine's subtle tiers - and when I asked what moment in the day he had liked best he said the nursery in Ashcroft because it was unusual that it was out of town. He didn't ask what moment I had liked best but I told him it was in the Ashcroft cemetery sitting on the bench above the Thompson looking at its green surface faceted with silver and the pale olive reflected by the opposite shore. Its entrancing wide mild murmur of sound. I liked the driving too, sun and little traffic and 97c such a good road I was wanting to race. At the same time as I was liking the athleticism of driving and liking what I saw a kind of loathing constant as the roar of the motor. Troubled conversation with myself about that loathing.

It says he's not feeling it. I don't know how that can be.

Is this what's called lack of compassion      no
It's anger      yes     
You're saying unjustified      YES
It's anger at being limited by other people's limits      yes
When you say being creative you mean what I did with students      yes
There's a helpless trained confluence      yes
The loathing is for what I am in relation to him      yes
I talked about Tom to get free of it      yes
It's on the level of body field      yes
It's contraction      yes
Anger that his field is so unpleasant I have to contract      yes
Anything more you want to say      no
 
Is that look of seeing ghosts just accidental      yes

He said he'd felt a thin shell around him preventing him from evil. Was it his own evil I asked. Yes.

Is that the key      yes
It's not evil, it's his missing agression      yes
Agression forbidden in childhood      YES
Is he sick because of it      yes
Is it too late      no
Rage      yes
Would he need help      no
Do it as conversation      yes
Should I do it with him      no
     
Any advice for him      no
Do you want to talk to him      no

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Almost over. I need to talk to Louie.

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Driving away from the airport I was remembering Tom saying You're a hater. Yes yes I am. When J began to hold out his arms to hug me goodbye I stepped back behind his suitcase. I grinned as I did it but I wouldn't appologize or explain.

Should I have hugged him      no
Why not      sensitivity, death, mourning, truth
Because I'm repelled by his dying      yes
That can't be helped      YES
Are there people who honestly are not      no
But willing to fake it      yes
Is faking it true compassion      no
There can be love and respect that overcome it      yes
But not in his case, I don't respect him      yes
He has a weak spirit      YES
Did he always      no
He's self-pitying and self-cossetting      YES
I regret hurting him, and I did      yes
He had to have felt my hatred      no

Standing there in last words he said "Take care of yourself. I worry about you." "Why!?" "You fall." I reared up, don't stick your self-pity on me. "Falling isn't catastrophic for me. I have many many years of falling ahead of me."

5a home yesterday, radiant grass along the verge, radiant green slopes blue and white and yellow with lupin, yarrow, mustard. Fresh sage. Shining clean-edged road with its new yellow stripe loping ahead past lakes and ranch roads and aspen declivities and cropped ridges crowned with pines.

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Solstice. There's a brutal wind that worries me for the young trees. I can see now which positions in the yard are more exposed; am worried for the filberts, the nectarine and the apricot, especially the nectarine, which is looking ragged. The pear has thick leaves, cherry and crabapple have a bit of shelter from the garage, the Cox has the alley wall, and the greengage between lattice and west fence hardly moves. Can see the dry wind is hard on the roses too though the Graham Thomas is alright tucked into the lattice corner.

Small satisfactions today, large enough: having washed all the guest bedding, four sheets etc, and having planted the sumac - first planting in the front yard - and the two bright periwinkle plants either side of the rocky corner. Lessing's The grandmothers, which I hadn't known existed. Pleased sentences with a vivid treeplanter girl in the laundromat.

When I took Russell's gingerbread cookies across the road to donate them to the Tuesday soup kitchen one of the women called after me, You've done good with your place. Yesterday early morning a woman passing when I was weeding the path nearest the fence, Now that's a garden. The Chapman fence-bed is solid California poppies at the moment with baby-blue-eyes and little white things hidden among them, an impressive declaration of personal quality it seems. Along Granite the ground is gravelly and dry but red dots of flax have opened among sparse spindly cornflowers.

Russell yesterday a deep-voiced white-bearded round-tummied Scandinavian gnome in a garden chair on the gravel next to me.

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Useless listless I don't even want to do this just want to escape, which I have done since he left, have read all day, still have unspoken complaints, beautiful days, liked sitting with Daph visiting on the outside chairs yesterday, what is it when I don't want to do anything, can always do something in the garden but not all day and what else is there, I have satisfied something and am on a ledge of emptiness, never like to say that because of the preaching when I was a kid that when your life is empty you must turn to god, it's empty of specific things and when I say so I feel heart pain, is the blankness not feeling heart pain, was I in heart pain about not liking him, was I irritated by him because of not feeling heart pain, sigh, heart pain that he was in no way what I need.

Sigh, I am arrived at the issue but there's no solution.

Lovelessness, anger,

He tried to be loving in his way said I looked nice wanted to touch me said his year in Europe was the happiest and I was important in it, am I grieving for the young people we were, grieving for him that he shuffles and gapes and slurs so I lose patience to ask what he said and lose patience to repeat what I said because he doesn't understand when I speak my usual pace. Held out his arms to me to say goodbye at the airport thanked me for everything. I was like that with Tom too always critical always refusing not always. I used to be able to like and be liked what has happened to me.

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Is that listless I-don't-wanna feeling always heart-pain avoiding yes

My heart has gotten very tight      no
It's just having no companion      yes
So shd I have stayed with Tom      NO
If I still had Joyce wd it be different      yes
Wd committing to some work make a difference      yes

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I should have found a way to stay in California      no
This place is nowhere      yes
That means I'm placeless      yes
Do you want to say something      (KnC), community, power, mourning
Slant (KnC)      generosity

No lover, no work, no place, stamping my foot, what's left -

What IS left??      (Death)
[Laughing] Okay - death      no
Deep change      yes
Please say more      (KnC), (hierophant), acting, subtle youth

I don't understand any of that.

Can you say change toward what      end of illusions, ducks in a row, deep change, friendship
List      yes

It feels like being stuck in the unmoving shallows needing to be shoved into the current. I'm seeing the Nicola when it was in spate, the fast-moving center of the stream.

Yes the garden, yes the house, yes the jeep, the pensions, but they're just platform and if they're all there is they're a prison. - The feeling I call stamping my foot, what is it. It's like a thump of anger in the solar.

-

It was 93 degrees. Sitting in the garden and not in love with it. It's patchy, messy, broken up. Buckets. Hoses. Scruffy grass. - There a cool air, not a breeze, a breath. Definite yellow there in the corner. Graham Thomas.

Things to take to Vancouver: rhubarb, lettuce, chard, thyme, oregano, roses. A begonia plant.

Next year plant rows closer together. Come back and do the perennial edge and the cold frame. Path along the brick edge? And the rock edge filter cloth?

"It's my love life" I said to J and yet I don't so much believe in it. Or anything. I'll believe in it more maybe when it's more attuned.

It's velvet air. Warm enough finally to sit outside. Gail's single yellow-peach rose.

The yard's laced-in with wires. Beyond them a soft sky layered in pearl-coloured bits of fleece, grey white pale pink.

27 Vancouver

Union Market, high summer.

Left at 6:30, industrial driving, forest, forest, change lanes, change lanes again. Get off at Clearbrook Road. Is she asleep? Her bed's made. "Have you seen Mary Epp?" "She's having breakfast - are you her daughter, you look just like her." She's a little thing huddled in a wheelchair in front of what they call devotions on TV. I wheel her outside. She's chatty, keeps it going. A scrap of a thing, round belly, no breasts, rough thin hair parted on the left. I've told her who I am. "I don't think I knew your mother" she says. I say she does but she doesn't know me so she imagines I was abducted. "How old were you when they took you?"

"You don't look much younger than me" she says. "Opinions differ" I say. She riffs on differences among people. She manages abstractions. Her theme of the day is that she was always controlled, had little choice. I agree.

Here at the market young persons where I was a young person. I don't know any of them. They tie up their dogs. There didn't use to be so many dogs. And bikes. And plants.

Luke yesterday saying he still beats himself up. I said unused capacity.

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I've often dreamed a house full of interesting objects belonging to David's family. There is always a top floor that's hard to get to. As I was climbing toward it this morning I was expecting what there'd been at other times, a final dangerous push maybe through a trapdoor or across a gap. But this morning I just walked in. At the far end of the room was a window overlooking I think a school, maybe Goddard. I was lying on my stomach on a bed on the floor looking down. I realized David was using the space as his room. A door was open onto a little bathroom, and there was a toilet that looked as if it worked.

What's up with Louie.

She's not interested in me either      yes
Because she's moved on      yes
Should I leave it at that      YES

Meantime her house is more beautiful than mine will ever be and she will always have money. My objects making it beautiful and objects I chose for her and now objects she's come by too, bad and good, the house itself the gift of my friendship with Leah. Here's the wonderful sofa, the Borrego table, there's my apothecary box from Chalk Farm Road. The BC Ferry bench in her bedroom. The scabby bench. The blue chest. The wicker chair.

Should I demand everything      yes
She'll freak      yes
Will she get over it      yes

Amazing how it scares me to think of demanding them.

I'm a bit scared of tonight too, is it.

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The Cinemateque 41 years after Tony and Kirk screened it with me and bought it, something I didn't mention in the journal at the time. A lot of people many of them young. I talked in the way I do now, friendly and modest and not present enough. I like being asked questions. Afterward I liked the booth full of young women lively and curious and as if respectful. I liked Michele [Smith] the moment I saw her and in that liking could immediately feel the evening was made. And lovely Shaun with his black beard and white teeth and look of smart brimming maleness.

I hated Wavelength and didn't like Trapline - and it was oh faded - and am surprised when other people like it - but was glad for the young woman who made the film so fearfully, that tender eager perceptive creature so full of delight and pain. When I read her pages yesterday I felt I should have stayed in London, I was stupider in Vancouver. That impression, though, comes from reading the index page extracts and not all the intervening junk. But still, the wealth of her life, Luke little, bad Roy, sexy Tony, Sal, the Co-op. The shabby town. The cats, the wide connectedness I'd very newly earned by honesty, bravery, eager intelligence and good looks.

So what kind of film would I like now is the question.

Michele quoted my best line, "What I like in film is precision, slightness, economy of means, delight, inference, and a kind of motion that can be followed but not tagged and makes seeing intelligent." "That is the kind of film I like too" she said. - Noticing how much Trapline has been helped by things I've written in later years.

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Streets leafed over, glimpse of the harbour at the end of a street, last evening the beach a streak of silver water with long freighters in parallel against the mountain shore, the downtown towers an always denser mushroom heap in the distance. Scent of trees, dark thrum of freighter motors. Riding through it feeling estranged - that approximate word - as if I am not in its present time. This sensation is hard to remember exactly enough. I haven't been here for almost two years. Seeing it after bare Merritt it seems a mythic city of luxury and concentrated will. Thronged streets, better bodies, a marquee with WAVELENGH and TRAPLINE running across it.

Mcleod's Books such wealth, books stacked deep in the aisles, good books, chosen books, Don beautiful as was, older, Michael Hayward older too, another beauty, both men older in the way of smart gentle men, thinner-faced, fine heads a bit shabbier. I wanted to feel Don would remember the young woman who brought him books to buy when she needed money. He bought them with a gentleness that seemed to me to say he understood it was a matter of some desperation.

When I was handing my bag across the desk a tall young man with a triangular face lit up to say he was at the screening the other night. Steven. Czech he said. I trusted the meeting and gave him my address.

I bought books and Don looked at them. I said "I have some kindness for you because you used to buy my books when I was hungry." He said "I'm glad you're not hungry any more and hungry for these." The moments standing anxious at his desk while he sorted what I'd brought into two piles.

Blenz at Hastings and Richards. So many young persons, so many Asians.

The air. Also the sense I have now of the ephemerality of human lives. As if each body passing were to shift through its whole time as it approaches and dissolve in an instant.

July 2

Louie carried my furniture downstairs while I collected my stuff and stripped the bed. Ferry bench, small bench, Chalk Farm medicine box, Kingston tool box, Chinese old people's paper-wire chair, shabby old things in the the back of the jeep. Heavy things, I was nervous watching the gas needle edge across more and more little ticks. Canada Day long weekend traffic dense and steady though it was early. A glittering day. Through the Valley roadside clover whisking past, daisies, chickory, buttercups, spiring clumps of fireweed. Then the Coque's long smooth climbing loops with cars like beads slipping on a wire. When at last I came down into the Merritt valley - a scatter of settlement below after all the forest miles - I saw the grass had begun to yellow in the five days I was away. I was home by 10:30. Pulled up at the gate, how's the garden. It's alright, they've watered.

July 8

Gloria Moses. Saturday morning, lot of people parking for the United Church junk sale. I've been weeding and transplanting, am standing looking around. Someone calls out behind me. When I turn a small Native woman walking in past the sunflowers. Keen honest brown face I like; looks like an Epp, Aunt Lil. I give her my jar of poppy seeds, some lettuce, parsley, dill, nasturtiums, rhubarb. She'll make a rhubarb cake for the gathering tomorrow to clean up at Shackan cemetery she says. Is seventy-six; shows me a red rash up and down the thin skin of the insides of her arms, "Dr Lyttle says it's heat rash." She's gazng at everything exclaiming. "Gooseberries! Everybody used to have gooseberries and currants and fruit trees." I say knock on my door anytime, come and have tea. She says she will.

Heat record yesterday. Fire along Highway 1; Ashcroft, Boston Flats, Cache Creek evacuated. Sky here whited out with smoke so Hamilton Hill is a barely visible pale blue outline. It's thickening fast. Can smell it and feel it on my eyes.

A nice filtered light in the garden. Hundreds of little mason bees in the California poppies. Hollyhocks I planted last year gracefully white and red along the fence. First cucumber. Am proud of the silver chairs on the gravel pad and the perfectly lovely thing I've made of the old non-wicker chair.

If I had to evacuate what would I take. My computers, my cameras, lamps, camping stuff, financial stuff, passport etc, bike maybe. My clothes wdn't take much space. Basic bedding. Certain books. The transcribed journals could burn.

9

Luke yesterday getting on a train in Littlehampton as we spoke. Was it the train that passes through Horsham, which was the Sufi farm's stop? He said it was.

but train journeys ... english countryside. foxgloves along the tracks. buddleia in brick cracks.
 
Yes lots of interesting flora
 
you take a different kind of note of flora now ...? i expect
 
I so do, everywhere
And I really like it
Like a whole new world is opening all around me
 
So pleased by that.
Grey cloud this morning with hot silver where covered sun hits an open edge. Hollyhock towers wobbling in a breeze. Sunday early.

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High filter this morning. The kind of pink sun there was in SD when there were fires up country. Creamy pink light on the white hollyhocks at the window.

I dreamed another variation of the house on Pender. What to call it. It's never the actual house on Pender though Choy is the landlord. In dreaming I remember having lived there with Luke and Margaret in the middle floor of the three-storey building. This time there'd been a lot of rebuilding. Even the street was being bulldozed and was cut off at one end. There were workmen on the steps, tiling I think. I had to struggle over sheets of glass to get up to the second floor. Then a diagram of the new flats that showed maybe twenty of them in the space of what had been one apartment, narrow boxes lined up along narrow corridors. My space was squeezed into a slot along the northeast corner. I recognized it because in it there was a photo of me and a photo of Maggie.

I'm baffled by that house. What has got narrower in me. Was the time with Maggie an apex of the 'spiritual'? It was when I was editing Trapline. Before the black lesbians, so a sweeter more confident time?

Is the dream saying something particular      yes
Can you say it in a sentence      yes, community, evasion, illusion, defeat
Is the house about me      no
My surroundings      yes
Community has got narrower      yes
In a psychic sense      YES
People are more confined      YES

11

Thick purplish sky behind the gently stirring spruce, frail pink light on the white pickup across the street. The flag says south wind but it hasn't blown away the smoke, may in fact be bringing it from Princeton.

Someone on Bowen Island has been reading The Golden West so I clicked through to a couple of index pages. There I am, there's Tom, and how can I be that real again, without him and without all I had then. I marvel, I laugh aloud. My heart hurts missing it.

Is the loss of that what the dream means yes

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Toward the west, the sea was lead-coloured, darker than the sky, to the east it was lighter than the air itself, nacreous, like a luminous mirror. But to the north, the sea and the sky joined without the faintest line of division, and became but the Universe, the unfathomable space.

Winter's tales.

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Reading The Golden West just now I realized that the journal of writing Being about IS The childhood of the philosopher; it is the ongoing childhood of the philosopher's personal life.

Could I do The air at the same time      yes

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Four-thirty dawn, white sky, east tinted palest orange behind that quietly present couple, spruce and linden; street light against the paleness a glowing golden drop. In the right-hand window a darker scene, fibrous grey cloud, the silver tree thrashing mildly, a white hollyhock peering in with its yellow eye.

Paul has been here since Wednesday. We've scouted land and built the coldframe. We were sitting in the garden after supper last evening. Have talked with great ease as we do. He said the Japanese in Canada don't like to live next to each other and that's why there are no Japantowns. I said You're wrong!, there's a Japantown in Vancouver. He got up offended and went home to the Royal RV. I knew it was because I'd said wrong.

Bumble bees in the hollyhocks though it's still so cold.

My young Czechs came Friday evening. I was the old woman with the garden. Made them dinner, gave them my bed, humored their young self-disclosure, liked the company of their lovely young skin, she a retiring sylph in a silky little slip of a red print dress, he a confident gusty spider-limbed East European with a mephistophelian beard. When he wanted to take my picture I said I don't like to have my picture taken because I wasn't always old. "I'll give you a photo from when I was your age." He put on rubber boots and cut the meadow at the front of the house. She raked into neat small European haycocks.

The clouds are coloured now. Pink whipped cream above the silver tree, which isn't silver at the moment, almost lead though light and bitty. It's an hour later.

It turned out that under the bridge at Spius Creek there is a swimming hole and next to it a small sand beach where a Native woman sat watching her kids. It's a broad fast green creek running over cobbles. The best lot we saw had a view to the north of a marvelous rusty triangle of mountain. Standing there we could hear wind in a stand of pines and beneath it as if in another layer the sound of the creek.

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Late evening in the garden under thick pale sky. The smoke has lifted some, I think; can't smell it now. Surrounded by vitality. Mid-July is this it seems, sunflowers wherever they have planted themselves standing to their knees in foamed-up green, dill stalks presences too with their layered clouds of yellow heads, burgeoning squash plants with already-formed fat noggins under their leaves. I pluck strings of red currants and run them through my teeth. The yellow gooseberries are ripe, the red not quite. Neat light green romaine lettuce heads. Dark green parsley. The nectarine is looking content after a couple of ragged weeks.

How about the others, my trees. The apricot is thick-hung with soft dark leaves. The crabapple is a stalwart thing, grown all over. The filberts' leaves are crisped rags. The Evans is scarecrow-shaped with spread arms. In its corner the Cox is a graceful maiden, a meliad. The greengage hasn't had time to do much but I'll go look ... it has exceptionally strong single leaves, not many but held with clear intent. The pear always looks a bit unwell because its leaves curl but it has new growth.

Hollyhocks along the side of the house are where they should be: Hollyhock Cottage. Slight second flushes on the Iceberg, the Alnwick, the White New Dawn. Paul fell over onto the Itoh with the wheelbarrow and broke one of its expensive stems. I'm eating potatoes, onions, cucumbers, orange tomatoes, lettuce, parsley, currants, raspberries, gooseberries, rhubarb, peas, dill, oregano, radishes. In vases: nasturtiums orange and yellow, sunflowers, lavendar, frothy oregano stalks, Queen Anne's lace and purple cosmos from the wildflower edge, sometimes johnny-jump-ups. The maroon double oriental poppy volunteers are vulgar things but I'm tolerating them for their seeds. What else is blooming: Calif poppies, Iceland poppies, white and purple salvia nemorosa, yellow daylily, stargazer lilies, mauve thymes, baby-blue-eyes, purple wallflowers, shirley poppies in masses pink and a few white, corn poppies, purple campanula where I allow next to the plum's trunk, anise hyssop, hidden squash and pumpkin and cucumber, climbing beans on the fence, borage, alfalfa, this little pink rock thing. [Lewisia.]

It's dark now but I can write by lamplight falling from the kitchen window. Mosquitoes.

What do I like best. The white oregano flowers next to the white salvia. The little nectarine held to its slender stake with a shoelace. The two sunflowers at the gate taller than passers. Hollyhocks white red and burgundy along the fence. The delicate shell-petal shape of the Alnwick rose. The porch platform with the silver chairs its height, the way it's a pause overlooking the garden when anyone comes out of the door. The proud tall dill. The concrete squares marking the path's beginning. The fluffier artemesia with purple anise hyssop. This pink rock plant in its thin concrete circle. The way the gravel has sorted as it's been watered. The simple fence with its wildflowers, an improvised exuberant elegance like nothing else in this town. That there are hard-surfaced paths though overgrown. The rhubarb's shapely pile. The plum tree's improved profile. This slightly raised edge along the gravel pad's west side. The compact bright cabbage-shapes of the romaines in their skimpy row. The lattice's white strips crossing the red compost-box slats. The new sour cherry jars.

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Garden photos early. Painted the inside of the coldframe and placed the two windows for its lid, banked it with earth. Brambles late afternoon for gluten-free. Library. Library Neil checking out my pile, "You've done a lot at your place." "You've driven past. Everybody in town notices." "Must mean you've done something." "Must mean I've done something." Neighbour woman to Paul, "She's a quiet person. But her garden speaks for her."

19

Standing at the beginning feeling what the work will be. Looking at my sentences with new doubt, I'll have to gear down into something harder than I've done with them so far. I want to keep native ease but at the same time will have to see what's made by that native ease from a more public sense of 'writing'. This is hard to say. Threshold sense. I opened the Golden West index page and instantly saw the flab in the writing. That made me see what the work will be.

What do I know about the shape of the whole. It stands beside Being about. It ends when it's done. July 1994 - July 2002 is 8 years. The work with Joyce, the work with Tom, the way coming through is done. There are two places. The garden before, teaching after, leave them out.

It's going to be hard. Complicated and hard. Be as if my own student.

It's a bid for.

The night before, I imagined the room with the tables and when I was thinking of the introduction and the conclusion on the two center tables I called up the child whose suffering in her bed was also accomplished in this time, and the young woman who learned to be an honest and responsible love woman, and felt them, or gave them to feel, as graduating too.
 
Yesterday morning when I began to feel fear, a burning at the heart, I lay down for half an hour and felt into the constriction. I thought of the church men in suits and the way they taught me to be frightened to show what I knew, and then I called up the three men who praised and defended me as a student, Mr Mann, Superintendent Toews, Martyn Estall. Mr Mann stood on the La Glace community center platform and said, You all know how I feel about Elfreda. Mr Toews got me the Canada Council trip to Stratford, afterwards found me walking with my suitcase on the Sexsmith road and drove me home. Martyn Estall at Queen's took care of me behind the scenes so I hardly knew he was doing it, got me the philosophy medal and the Woodrow Wilson nomination. Lying there I imagined the three of them in the Halpern Lounge defending me.
 
Yesterday Ray and Barry were that too. Ray said he hadn't seen language so well described anywhere. Barry said, in the first round of questions, what amounted to, If you mess with Ellie I am going to fight you.
 
Calmly knowing, then standing your ground, Louie said.
 
"slow growth by means of the work on betrayal of the mother"
 
The depth of the desire, which is a well into the beginning. A nakedness: I won't bluff again, I'll honour myself.

I'll want to dwell on the romance but that isn't the story. I'll want to include place and time and can do that because it's the base.

It's first person but not a journal.

-

After breakfast I lay down and dreamed Jamila was trying to get me back. It was her younger self and very like her. There was a sketched world map under her hand. She drew a circle around a place I took to be Hong Kong. I could live there with her. I drew a circle around southern California, This is where I'd want to be. I made a firm lucid speech refusing her. "And not Tom either, though for a different reason."

That's about writing isn't it.

Where it begins: book, garden, men, strong pain, body work,

Where to start: what were the questions:

The philosophy and the personal coming-through support each other.

What's best in it: mysterious abundant realness.

What stays mysterious: the Book's authority. Young self and authoritative self.

Liking the journal's accuracy of multiplicity, how to choose a simpler line through. Easily overwhelmed in it.

How to manage for readers the raw unlikeness of how I've lived.

Am I ready      yes
It's a step up      YES

20

Having supper with Paul and the Czechs in the verandah I see a black man across the street walking fast from the north. Am saying "We never see black people here" when he passes close enough to notice how beautiful he is. The relaxed sentient way he's walking with this chest forward and his chin up. Corn-rows shaped to his head. As he's whisking past, his high round rump. Yum, I say. We think he must be a musician. Next day I saw him again walking from the south. Today on the Grapevine a notice of the festival this weekend in Spences Bridge. He's in a group. He's Nigerian and his name is Courage Eigbike. I'm telling this story because seeing a radiantly beautiful person here is such a marvel.

Another story. I was organizing the garage Friday afternoon when I heard someone call out. Stepped onto the sidewalk and saw a man who looked like Paul [Kinsella]coming through the garden. Is it, I was thinking, but no. Taller and younger but the same dry blond hair and Irish crescent face. A good lean body in walking shorts and boots. He stands in front of me holding out a book and a news clipping mounted on card covered with plastic. He says he's a writer from Newfoundland who sells his book door to door. I'm a writer from here, I say. He doesn't stop for that, just wants a sale. It's a travel book. The cover declares it's a best-seller. "A best-seller" I say. A million sold, he says - something like that. I'm trying to read his face, what kind of life is this, he looks too self-cossetting for the hardship it must be. "No," I say, "but I'll talk to you." He has turned and is walking away fast. "Some writers have to make money" he calls back bitterly in an accent more Irish than Newfie. Next day coming from the credit union on Voght there he is on the sidewalk. He won't meet my eye.

-

From then:
 
Is this a question of sorting the I's      yes
Will you tell me what my original and true goal is      to love a man

She is a motive, he is not a motive, he's a competence at coming through

Are both of these unconscious      yes
Does my Self have an inherent aim      no

It doesn't have a destiny because it's collective

Does larger self have a destiny      yes, to die. to lose everything.
What's the best thing love woman can do      survive
What would happen if I sacrificed her      she'd be replaced by a child
Is that what I'm supposed to do      yes
And what wd be that child's natural destiny      vision
I need to go back to find the root of vision      yes
 
And what is vision's work      wisdom, true knowledge
Will you help me? I'm willing now      completed work
Did I have to bring love woman out      to get to the child
 
Will she keep falling in love with men who refuse her      yes
What should I do when she does      feel her oppression
Will she go on doing that forever      yes

I learned one thing, I learned how to fight with love, when I did fight - I learned to not escalate.

How 'mind' is imagined.

Skill is built in the conflict. A tension endlessly fruitful.

21

I was picking sour cherries yesterday in a wind so strong branches were thrashing in my hands. This morning six of the square pints and seven of the little half-pints stood cooled on the counter, now red glass in the upper shelves. This year I know how to can. I love the pop when jars seal.

Have been thinking how comforting my small kitchen tasks are, standing at the sink washing a few dishes, moving the chair to sweep under the table, replacing flowers for vases around the house. In the garden I carry water to each of the trees every day. Yesterday dug potatoes and carrots for lunch, cooked them with peas and chard, slathered butter and ate marveling how delicious they were.

-

Emptied one of the compost bins into the cold frame. Tired. White sky, an overcast evening. Rained a bit. The silver tree is looking quietly blissed-out, almost asleep. What do I mean. It's moving but just a bit. All over the canopy leaves that are tilted to the sky are lit but not bright, and shaded leaves are the same olive green just a bit darker. It's as 3D as a cloud but so gently and subtly and in such fresh matte color. - Why is it worth trying to write what can't be read. Only because it helps me look. And now I've seen that the buds or are they seed-cases on the hollyhock's stem are the same - no not the same - silvery green.

First of the 7-o'clock-meeting parkers. I can go turn on the sprinkler, it'll be a long time till Monday morning.

23

The mighty dead. I like that he's Vita's grandson and ran around Sissinghurst as a kid, why, because it's as if he's descended from Virginia. I didn't know that when I found it in the Greece shelves of McLeod's though. I frown at some of his sentences, want to cut, and suspect he overstates his claims. And yet two things. One is that it's a model of a charming way to write about something, giving some of his own times, not too much, and infusing his whole book with love. It's bravely personal. The second is just that it's Greece, the pagan Mediterranean, the gods, the dry shores. It has made me remember the Sunday I woke alone next to the gate at Mycenae and in the afternoon - today I realized it must have been the same day - found myself at the end of a road looking down on a tiny cove, white sand under calm green sea. Just that moment. I went in, stood to my chest in the perfectly mythical warm green crystalline tide. I can see what I was wearing too, the bikini there'd been in the window of a shop at the foot of the Piazza di Spagna steps. It was a sort of pale tan sprigged with little flowers. I'd furtively swopped bottoms for a size larger.

I slept at Mycenae and at Les Baux. Even then I was claiming affiliations. Paul left me The blue mountains of China and in it I understood the Plautdietch, recognized the old Mennonite sentence rhythms, remembered the religious forms, liked knowing my grandparents' stories in more detail, admired how much Wiebe had put together, but I don't claim any of that, I don't want it, I don't belong to it. My genes go back further: they must.

Andy's Emily has a baby boy she's named Aron. He wanted to tell me. Maybe because I was there forty-four years ago when he was dreaming of a little girl.

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the Frisians it seems that they and their language were more akin to the ultimate English than any of the other Germanic tribes that invaded Britain


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